x
No Plagiarism!uZue2NU4DL0pN4N5Ya7sposted on PENANA 大家好,今天我將爲海貍的作品《夢、時空、裂痕》寫下心得。8964 copyright protection832PENANAaUOQZCNcz4 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAVuaga5ZGBL
8964 copyright protection832PENANAwOnSdE0gmf 維尼
首先,依然不厭其煩地先説明我對於心得的想法。8964 copyright protection832PENANAbUXx1JQpw6 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAvHC3hAeME4
8964 copyright protection832PENANA5ViLY6SDte 維尼
在這個寫得好並不代表一定有人氣的嚴苛環境下,我希望心得不只是單純挖掘作者可進步的點,還希望作者能夠獲得動力完成作品,甚至……8964 copyright protection832PENANAzmHaE6mdrd 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAnYygKVfPMt
8964 copyright protection832PENANAGfZNXYG9sF 維尼
……能夠讓心得替這部作品召來更多讀者。8964 copyright protection832PENANAa9oyOeVj4e 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAX7wnxMaKQO
8964 copyright protection832PENANA9eWKgGhwMb 維尼
有鑒於此,本心得將會分爲兩個部分:8964 copyright protection832PENANAofRqHZsO3I 維尼
1)寫給讀者的宣傳式心得8964 copyright protection832PENANATczy2jRfMI 維尼
2)面向作者的分享式心得8964 copyright protection832PENANA2LoQqf6v0s 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAacgBTHKe9z
8964 copyright protection832PENANA8WoLfAKgml 維尼
事不宜遲,現在開始。8964 copyright protection832PENANAbk53DZlI65 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAjozjqmpw3B
8964 copyright protection832PENANApCssRWrVzl 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA1XzfvrGJnP
8964 copyright protection832PENANAOCpCGBvDYY 維尼
1)寫給讀者的宣傳式心得8964 copyright protection832PENANAfoqOYcK202 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAOfhyrU4QVI
8964 copyright protection832PENANAL19Y5mlw9D 維尼
首先,《夢、時空、裂痕》是個怎樣的故事呢?8964 copyright protection832PENANAkLJHrFuzyM 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAefMK2o3CwD
8964 copyright protection832PENANAjAMoSCBgY3 維尼
根據我閲讀的範圍,這是一個關於女主角在現實生活是作家,但睡覺做夢時,卻會進入另一個時空(?),在奇幻背景的世界裏化身成同名的貴族之女,展開另一段人生。8964 copyright protection832PENANA1VEVtNvcet 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAsJNe0yEM0h
8964 copyright protection832PENANAPNRFP6VYH1 維尼
稍微透露一點,女主角在夢裏并非普通人,而是擁有特殊能力的……就劇透到這裏。8964 copyright protection832PENANAo5zZge4Dbj 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAPJCWXSha8m
8964 copyright protection832PENANAr9jVKn3ixQ 維尼
當然,夢與現實并非徹底分割,反而有所連結。8964 copyright protection832PENANAHCGpA5Jiwp 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAuWGJK2GKgd
8964 copyright protection832PENANA3CMuFNMhJj 維尼
女主角會帶著現實的記憶到夢裏,在奇幻世界提出沒人知道的「棒球」,同時也會帶著那裏的記憶回來現實,並以自己的經歷為藍本,出版了一本小説。8964 copyright protection832PENANAQ1OARR5pou 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA5ji2mxcISn
8964 copyright protection832PENANAxXbkH4kmJw 維尼
因爲這樣,其他也能在夢與現實之間穿越的人士,開始注意到了女主角。8964 copyright protection832PENANApeklbjzB7C 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAfXlwnRRlaT
8964 copyright protection832PENANACWEN36KCTC 維尼
目前只知道一位,但感覺未來會更多?8964 copyright protection832PENANAeX0IRSrZj8 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAGq6AysrZdg
8964 copyright protection832PENANAJqCKcwmceN 維尼
想當初,第一次遇到這部作品時,我内心的想法就是「哇……誰那麽勇?居然像我一樣,敢於挑戰夢與現實穿插的故事?」。8964 copyright protection832PENANARGXEMtLxJi 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAcxuRKLs0BS
8964 copyright protection832PENANAMJUX4qsgi6 維尼
事實證明,作者憑藉著本身扎實的寫故事功力,配得上這個「勇」字。8964 copyright protection832PENANAVD6kPNJeDD 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAZCxpe09VST
8964 copyright protection832PENANAKR4aM21G5F 維尼
總之,同一部作品,兩個不同世界觀的劇情,但又彼此相關,換句話説,這不就是買一送一的大優惠作品嗎?8964 copyright protection832PENANAiqBq7TGHII 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAkdjBFVRQFS
8964 copyright protection832PENANAc0IZGFzkFC 維尼
這麽值得的優惠,當然要趁機把握了!8964 copyright protection832PENANAnUNjaZVfOb 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAtwGk6HETOT
8964 copyright protection832PENANAeIaY0ggSGw 維尼
不過,閲讀這部作品需要點耐心,畢竟主角在夢與現實之間穿插,兩個世界的故事都要寫一寫,導致劇情的進展較慢。8964 copyright protection832PENANAS3HrWxAovA 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAI5xrvrupgn
8964 copyright protection832PENANAsjbimj1ohK 維尼
我閱讀了前面十五章,似乎夢的部份才剛讓主要角色登場完畢,棋盤上的棋子差不多擺好位置,劇情正要開始。8964 copyright protection832PENANAgZMQLAvrrJ 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAY8crBhlBgq
8964 copyright protection832PENANAXS3s1iNVyC 維尼
但若有耐心,又想得到買一送一大優惠的各位,歡迎點擊以下連結:8964 copyright protection832PENANADYlJpFPyXq 維尼
https://www.penana.com/article/10040908964 copyright protection832PENANA9C3TiEbcu1 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANARZCiyKpvum
8964 copyright protection832PENANAKmRHQZvbWQ 維尼
以上就是《寫給讀者的宣傳式心得》。8964 copyright protection832PENANA6Xdl07wBCG 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA4Ukf1GIz04
8964 copyright protection832PENANAAFvYpRNwG4 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANANID7LQ47tR
8964 copyright protection832PENANA6W1QWT4VpM 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAJkbTh7vVYe
8964 copyright protection832PENANAocT8mCdyD2 維尼
2)面向作者的分享式心得(含劇透)8964 copyright protection832PENANAL0KsGQX1dj 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAW6SI5kx0yI
8964 copyright protection832PENANAz3LAPvsxhr 維尼
就像上面所説的,作者基本功扎實,也沒什麽好挑的。8964 copyright protection832PENANA5Nae5apF3Y 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAR5DCeh7GTN
8964 copyright protection832PENANAjAl1YSELDm 維尼
前面十五章都還在帶出主要角色,比較令我有深刻印象的,就是女主角原來是紅術師,似乎能夠期待她發揮能力的劇情。8964 copyright protection832PENANAvkQCJpTm6H 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAaMP6G81C8y
8964 copyright protection832PENANA4XhVENBwCU 維尼
如果之後證明每個紅術師都是可以穿越在夢與現實之間,而不是僅限於男女主角,那就更好玩了。8964 copyright protection832PENANAdSyCTnm21g 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAFZXJxKPvwq
8964 copyright protection832PENANAddtDxMfLvq 維尼
目前最好奇的,反而是角色們用英文字母寫出來的名字。8964 copyright protection832PENANAloGyHCmLQ2 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA53tf4Vd031
8964 copyright protection832PENANA47CZc6D0RB 維尼
我看了看《角色設定》,也沒列出來,其實頗感失望。8964 copyright protection832PENANA4iV12GkW2n 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA5Zxl74VjSg
8964 copyright protection832PENANASc8tu8pfhQ 維尼
爲什麽會那麽在意呢?8964 copyright protection832PENANAHWdNTTNDIa 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANALHSAgaKvt0
8964 copyright protection832PENANACgqROSAFUU 維尼
因爲我個人對於中文字呈現的西方名字,其實很難記在腦海裏。8964 copyright protection832PENANABQWuyQuM3Y 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAuPRtpZydv8
8964 copyright protection832PENANAbBnrU6Zp2p 維尼
畢竟身爲馬來西亞華人,身邊大多數的人名字,我都用英文或馬來文字母去記,很少用中文名,除非對方是華人。8964 copyright protection832PENANAL2wVMEufEU 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA9djSZjLw8u
8964 copyright protection832PENANAiRx2yvZr6D 維尼
閲讀方面也是,任何英文書籍,我都傾向於閲讀原版,例如《哈利波特》全系列,而不會特地尋找中文翻譯版。8964 copyright protection832PENANAMdpK3n49pb 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA2GqOBvnxSj
8964 copyright protection832PENANA0MgGDWGehZ 維尼
這造成我在面對西方名字時,比起瑟琳,我會更記得Seline。(自己翻譯,應該錯誤吧?)8964 copyright protection832PENANAfi1L5IReAx 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA2nnqYiKqW0
8964 copyright protection832PENANAtilGpTpR9J 維尼
特地提出這點,是感覺可能會有其他海外華人跟我一樣,所以作者若想要攻略更多海外讀者,可以稍加注意。8964 copyright protection832PENANAkTHxPeIpmO 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAoZg3GZi1Ui
8964 copyright protection832PENANA58bf0Oj9m2 維尼
順便説一下,這部作品的寫文風格非常有翻譯文學的味道,我有時讀著讀著,會不自覺地把某些句子或對白想像成英文。8964 copyright protection832PENANATp0c1Lms1v 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAJ0TxF4Lkaf
8964 copyright protection832PENANAuuGV134BI8 維尼
以上就是我的心得,説實話能寫的不多,畢竟找不到明顯的缺點。8964 copyright protection832PENANAEC34vII90W 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAKpL0vOjJQJ
8964 copyright protection832PENANAB76FmdLpoi 維尼
唯一的遺憾是劇情進展不夠快,這也是爲什麽我盡量拖延到最後一刻才發佈心得,想説再讀多幾章,看看還能再寫些什麽。8964 copyright protection832PENANAnNB2ISP9aC 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA7i1x7xmlYW
8964 copyright protection832PENANAb40I0N8SMK 維尼
當然,我並不認爲這是缺點,純粹是劇情格局龐大。8964 copyright protection832PENANAgLY53yWoyn 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANA5nSulHlxDN
8964 copyright protection832PENANAnCbOhFZSkA 維尼
希望以後閲讀完整本後,我能寫個更詳細的心得。8964 copyright protection832PENANA6GVXecroko 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANATIi5r8hCFE
8964 copyright protection832PENANAZdhYniuEsQ 維尼
想説的就這些,勇者海貍請繼續加油!8964 copyright protection832PENANA3eagDSNnYQ 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANAjZaWOZ0jRo
8964 copyright protection832PENANAIC4TFbQBOh 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANABqIuhz4Npn
8964 copyright protection832PENANA4vWAxkH7Kw 維尼
836Please respect copyright.PENANABjDeSmpRpY
8964 copyright protection832PENANAitvsvKGsIM 維尼
15.158.61.5
ns 15.158.61.5da2