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樂園/Paradise

皮皮 皮皮
Oct 6, 2024 132 2 Mins Read 673 Words
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幼時若是感到徬徨不安

只要後背緊貼著妳的溫度

就會知道回家的路

知道燈塔的方向

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在月光下起舞，我以為我們終歸會一輩子如此

可時間還是過於無情

無情到我以為，恍惚沒有妳

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從最一開始

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她們匆匆跑過，那茵綠草原

在有太陽的時候，她偶爾會想起過去

想起那個不見光的地下室，還有與＂她＂的最後一面

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春風會吹過，帶走哀愁

在陽光肆意的午後

書頁被隨意翻動著，直到它結尾

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『我對愛他也沒有那麼大興趣，就只是因為是妳——結果我們互相誕下了彼此最憎恨的模樣。』

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在無數回顧中，在最後加冕上

只有少女讓她停下了腳步

夢境不會說謊

除非它一早就以謊言的形式存在

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「為何妳還要回來呢、艾莉絲？」

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然後向深淵祈禱、向死而生

在火光的盡頭，我追逐、我哭喊

救贖不會到來

正如樂園早已腐爛

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火光紛至的過往中，一分為二的人影搖晃

背腹受敵——她想起＂母親＂的告誡

她不斷張闔開口，呢喃著同一句話

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小偷、小偷、該死的、小偷

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「妳若想要，便自己來拿，王座就在那裡。」

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就那樣斬去她雙翼、割去她聲音——

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聖子啊總會垂憐目光、在流放中墜落

傾聽生命的垂死掙扎、在放逐過後

直到跨越漫長光年

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再次、降臨

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等到放逐天堂

聖星芒將會指引，跨越忒修斯之船，在巴比倫哀嘆之前

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向神祇發起挑戰

成為命運基石、成為永恆夢魘

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那不可違抗，命運

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我，又一次聽見

來自伊甸、迴響

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那是、

屬於新世紀的再降臨

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一切苦難不過是——

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必經之路。

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皮皮的屁話:

「我糾結在乖乖寫稿跟散發思緒中，最後他們打一架，我贏了(???」

 「所以整理了章頭詩，本來主線就藏在裡面，合起來看就是樂園的故事，但不知道是不是寫得太隱晦跳躍了?不過等全篇完結回來看會比較清晰。」

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樂園/Paradise(長篇小說/意識流/奇幻架空，全篇共40萬字上下，接近結尾。)

皮皮:這邊會更新比較慢，以角角者為主，反正也涼了~

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作品連結:https://www.penana.com/story/154984

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大章節視覺圖(圖皆為本人拍攝後排版):

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※章節預計為七大章，目前進度來到第六章，倒數完結※

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#0 Prompt
#1 【示範作】心火
#2 樂園/Paradise
#3 師徒
#4 三年分別，夢中才見
#5 冰火
#6 殺人魔的童話
#7 你好，引路人大大
#8 若幻想比現實更加美
#9 不平靜的書店
#10 《傳奇的L》
#11 安魂曲
#12 《螻蟻》
#13 好人
#14 替你記得
#15 【詩＝詞＋歌】Work 12R 綿羊的C調卡農
#16 紫羅蘭
#17 《事件簿》
#18 疼
#19 《往日美談》
#20 繁花落岸
#21 識年
#22 不似愛麗絲
#23 傾斜
#24 《向星星許願》我不願單飛。
#25 我本凡人
#26 小女子共吃飯
#27 天地神人的誓言
#28 情斷之時
#29 《隔閡》山與海，是註定不相連的
#30 天使
#31 洛家四才女
#32 鯨魚白日
#33 十年歸
#34 飛鳥，飛鳥
#35 集體欺凌（七言律詩）
#36 水墨畫
#37 結語
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