咳咳......對不起啦,過了這麼久才發這個結語!
因為除了要選出第一二三名外,還要準備一幅畫.......537Please respect copyright.PENANAOl0GiJk5yx
謝謝大家的內心等待!537Please respect copyright.PENANAOxXBW2XGH2
這是我第一次辦創作挑戰!謝謝大家的參與......原來各位都很會寫呢!537Please respect copyright.PENANACT30JdMwyV
希望大家玩得開心!
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以下就是結果!
第一名:烈焰女王《燃燒之心》- Wendy,Dani,Brain
在留言中已經有說過只有一個角色的獨角戲其實很難寫537Please respect copyright.PENANAeYfzNkUs3V
人物的描寫﹑動作﹑情緒變換,語句也很流暢537Please respect copyright.PENANAYJQbw4uje2
蠟燭﹑看書到後面的情節也滿有畫面的!537Please respect copyright.PENANAa4qS2Phpoj
我很喜歡!!謝謝你帶來佳作!
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這個......老人的救贖的確有一股淡淡的哀傷。537Please respect copyright.PENANAkNDTNoPcqW
因為自己小時候的過失令家人意外死去,剩自己一直苟且活著......537Please respect copyright.PENANAb7OSoUzq3j
人生最可怕的,並不是災難降臨在自己身上,而是眼睜睜看著身邊所愛的人受苦受難而你卻無能為力。537Please respect copyright.PENANAUbrO4aqJLG
到最後,老人留下遺書回到兒時故居尋求「救贖」,雖然自殺是不好的......但對九十幾歲的老人來說,好像真的只有這樣才能解脫......537Please respect copyright.PENANAxZMv3CSUE8
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這畫面是老人在窗戶前落泊地留下遺書......537Please respect copyright.PENANA0RPq7qAyKx
嗚......謝謝參與!!!
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畫面描述得十分細緻,女幽靈安妮被告知她已經死亡時慢慢變成少女的模樣也讓人印象深刻。537Please respect copyright.PENANA3zKZJjfXIu
不過......我居然畫錯了!!!537Please respect copyright.PENANAiTomw3aos5
安妮應該是綠色的眼睛!!。。。537Please respect copyright.PENANAY223BbZsKr
之後會再補上綠色眼睛的安妮><JUNO對不起啦。。。。。。
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雪中少年 - SETSUNA:537Please respect copyright.PENANAyWGyr6RfNq
據作者說這是一篇同人文,文章簡而精,我雖然沒看過那漫畫,但光從字句能想像到當時的畫面。537Please respect copyright.PENANA1TdhGg2Nhg
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賽場 - 檸檬綠:537Please respect copyright.PENANACQ97CSJsy7
這篇雖然沒有直接描寫主角的種族,但字裡行間也令人聯想。會是有獸耳的人形生物,還是主角只的是隻「披著單薄號碼衣」的狗狗?作者很聰明的選擇性描寫並引起人的想像!
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我在銀河的彼端等你 - CHOPHY:537Please respect copyright.PENANAh6EOnc4E0J
故事內容有點像interstaller的情節,交錯的時間線也需要讀者動腦分析,雖然說字數很多,但看著看著反而覺得後面情節跑太快呢!!後面收訊號那段也滿令人感動呢!!
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人生在所難免,請你成為更好的人 - 面具:537Please respect copyright.PENANAO8FMxZYgMm
文風平實完整,短短一千多字能完整故事結構也不容易!畫面平淡但溫馨,在文中結尾一句交代了比賽的結果。人生在世,是已經出生的孩子,哭著大喊以後一定會更加努力,是成為更好的人。很溫馨的小故事!!
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背叛 - 洛桑:537Please respect copyright.PENANAPJOrJFhVfQ
文章只有兩百多字,簡單的描寫了背叛者的心情和被害者的心有不甘,心理描寫得很不錯!!
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曾經被淹沒- 天也:537Please respect copyright.PENANA3CwsHGWTi6
我阿......其實很受不了兄妹那種......嗚嗚......每當看到兄妹檔就會先加20分XD537Please respect copyright.PENANAdMu0bX5TNe
咳咳,好。537Please respect copyright.PENANAHQclnArTTD
妹妹依賴哥哥和哥哥守護妹妹的感情描寫得不錯!537Please respect copyright.PENANAN0avg9xfO6
可是最後是天人永隔......嗚......
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《鬼島:瓦爾克拉斯》- 穹葉:
是PoE!畫面感十足,彷彿就看到那冷眼旁觀的村民完全不甩主角眼看遠方的樣子XDDD謝謝你的參與!!!
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我好像愛上你了... - 仙人掌+果凍(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧:537Please respect copyright.PENANAjdQMuBGkOV
很青澀的初戀,初次愛上別人心裡的患得患失和酸酸甜甜的感覺都有感受出來!最後是大團圓結局......QQ看得出來作者是個佛心而且心靈純潔的人!537Please respect copyright.PENANAlkGXcTIkGj
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燒開水 - 兀心:537Please respect copyright.PENANA3iPRyISdTZ
你知道嗎......一開始我還以為是什麼驚天動地的劇情......537Please respect copyright.PENANAYQD4974kws
結果只是燒個開水嘛XDDD?!537Please respect copyright.PENANAErs0G9GxSG
不過最尾那句:孤獨,但不無趣。也是整篇文章最畫龍點睛的那句!537Please respect copyright.PENANAOYnVrP3pH3
謝謝你的參與!!!!
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以上就是我拖很久的結語啦!537Please respect copyright.PENANAUecaTBdW17
最近也在著手新的故事,已經開始寫了......不過寫得不太順,希望這裡了了牽掛,能夠專心寫故事!!
有機會我會再辦第二屆的畫面挑戰!537Please respect copyright.PENANAXNgsgTV3te
希望大家再來參加XD!
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另外,有興趣也來看看的的長篇小說,很殺時間的XD537Please respect copyright.PENANAXqirFhOWlM
《沚汐與晨》537Please respect copyright.PENANANmamYr0ovK
《與龍夢蝶》
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