
※先虐受後虐攻 ※渣攻預警 ※自卑受
穆然,原著孤君。
攻:易天,彆扭富二代攻1836Please respect copyright.PENANAcJDEyiKM9r
受:穆然,自卑孤兒受1836Please respect copyright.PENANAOY6eItOcFt
落花只花了兩天時間就二刷了XD1836Please respect copyright.PENANAI6xVf8jy61
手機裡分頁沒關,基本上都是我曾經覺得還不錯的,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAA8Nh62hnR3
但又放太久根本忘了內容,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAJaChVjekrb
就迅速二刷趕快放上來了哈哈。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAekHJD6NoRH
好啦進入正題。
小說一開始是以穆然作為主要視角,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAwU7ixNEIjB
用第一人稱方式下去敘事,1836Please respect copyright.PENANA2PFlqQOL98
以這種方式要去帶出人物的心理活動,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAtHFycrn536
讓讀者去了解這個人實際上的個性為何。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAIm2JAGPRxm
前半段基本都是在虐受,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAEUoQ69zf7E
他用了不是太好看的方式去接近易天,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAyjaClEcEQG
以為能得到他的寵愛,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAVwh0ZRMHIl
但實際上還是把自己卑微到了塵埃裡,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAbSyJatQ4cz
發生的任何對他不公平的事情,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAoUOk7iJPN6
都會下意識覺得是自己應得的報應,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAME4d7ECzul
這點落花個人認為作者表達方式不錯,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAbKHuC856sC
但有可能是作者的第一本小說,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAcJOq1Iu2T9
前半段第一人稱敘事有些地方蠻讓人尷尬。
中段則是虐攻,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAPemFiTJKld
以第三人稱方式,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAAkOHau4Y6b
去描寫易天照料穆然期間的心理變化,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAYfDcOhjiTB
從一開始的暴躁易怒,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAgIGkyCIKQq
到最後變得溫和又有耐心,1836Please respect copyright.PENANA5nyUVozI30
以一個從未有過的姿態放下了身段,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAyzjS2Qj5iP
漸漸發現自己早已愛上他而不自知。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAkR6deSuzIO
後段還是虐攻,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAZf1DuK5LaB
主要時間段為穆然的病情好轉,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAlCzoBrK5GX
但易天拉不下臉面,又有些許報復心態,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAkLcnlPQoCG
以為穆然不在乎,所以用了很傷人的方式去對待他,1836Please respect copyright.PENANALZ8q855qe5
而後穆然不顧自身的相互讓他真正意識到自己做錯了,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAFvJX3M0EU9
拚了命的想挽回他,1836Please respect copyright.PENANA3RdIc2U2FI
無論是與家裡抗爭,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAVP1qWYq3pj
還是到後來再次放下身段去找他,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAXF3nn2ZpmS
都只是想證明給穆然看,讓他知道自己是真的愛他,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAQs0De9DJtW
而不是出於各種愧疚心態。1836Please respect copyright.PENANA9NGpeB0lRc
整本小說基本上敘事較多,1836Please respect copyright.PENANArEXFbIaq5t
場景描繪部分較少,也就少了讓我特別注意的地方,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAiVbwbBwewJ
只有幾個轉折落花覺得還不錯,1836Please respect copyright.PENANAQVtq5rzhZf
算是有戳到點的,以下就按照慣例列上來啦。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAbQaY0rKsK6
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在這個世界上他只有自己,後來他把自己都丟了,也就真正的一無所有了。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAfAKLXunc4j
這段話算是蠻觸動我的,甚至可以說是某段日子裡自己的心情寫照。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAwUicTBt65d
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「你知道穆然嗎。」易天突然開了口,大概是還沉浸在回憶中的關係,他的聲音顯得非常溫柔。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAJRfwAJYE6s
那人停下炒菜的動作,回頭看一眼易天,有些窘迫地道:「不......不知道......」1836Please respect copyright.PENANAgRWLHWb7mw
易天卻好像並不介意對方的反應,也不多做解釋,只是慢慢收起嘴角的笑,啞著聲音道:「我很想他。」1836Please respect copyright.PENANArpBq0Cd3gG
明明甚麼都不知道,也不多煽情和撕心裂肺的話,說話的人更是非常的平靜,可是不知道為什麼,這人覺得,他眼前的人,好像已經痛苦得快撐不下去了。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAuWkd3DO7lz
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「但是你......」他猶豫了一下,才輕聲道:「別再喝酒了,好好照顧自己的身體。」1836Please respect copyright.PENANAFtlwftenyQ
易天點點頭,鄭重答:「好,以後都聽你的。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAT9jVWBXTFd
穆然有些慌張,「我不是這個意思!」1836Please respect copyright.PENANA8Y0l1RDJLz
易天看著穆然,嘴角帶出個淡淡的笑,「我是這個意思。」說完也不管穆然的反應,端起碗低下頭繼續喝粥。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAHc2SQSbUc3
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他們相遇的最初並不是帶著微笑的你好,中途經歷了各種傷害誤會,所幸結局也不是遺憾的再見和相忘。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAyktUIk44k1
他一直想要一個家,最後他也給了他一個家。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAVOyH0UeLgE
屋子裡的燈光很暖,他們以後幸福的時光還很長。1836Please respect copyright.PENANAw1OgIEVkoZ