Every description was brilliant, however, I was truly captivated by Regrets last for an afterlife time. It provided me with an interesting image, one that I was delighted by. Most importantly, it provoked emotion, and left me honestly feeling the main characters regret, and craving more.
Farewell is my 2nd place. Well written and Generally interesting. An amazing piece of writing, in my opinion, however, I found myself unable to completely gripped by the story of this gothic tomb.
Lastly, in 3rd place came When the Fire Took Over. This was a beautiful entry, gripping and interesting, but, again, the story did not truly captivate me. It did not make me cry. The idea, however, is wonderful, and I would love to read more about the wrongs of this fire imp.
Again, every description was brilliant in it's own right, and I would like to thank each writer for entering.
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