Yunga Elantra is the daughter of the famous Elantra Pirates, but it's been twenty years since they died, and Yunga is the only living Elantra out there. She is set on restoring her families legacy, but after stealing some bread and getting arrested. She is roped in to do a mission for a king, along with other criminals to earn their freedom. She's now a captain of a fleet, but it's not under her control, it's under the king's control.

In a quest to attain the mythical powers of Tethralith, two novice Scholars, Ferin and Rodrick, find themselves entangled in an ominous plot. As they get closer, their desperation seizes control, all under the looming shadow of the almighty being they sought to claim.

This is a chapter from the book that I am currently working on. It's barely read through and has a lot of spelling errors, but I'm mostly just trying to see what people's opinions are on the characters. I might add other samples of the story as I work on it. This is nothing concrete, just a small jumble of snippets, and drafts of scenes. Thank you for reading the feedback is highly appreciated! <3

Read the title, that one weird guy sitting in the corner!

Leiko, a down on his luck member of the Surveyor's Guild, has an opportunity. A competition has arisen to rise through the ranks of the guild. To go from a lowly basement dweller to sitting amongst the plush surroundings of the upper floors.

All he has to do is earn 1000 gold. How hard can that be? After all, it's not like he can stay dead.

Garen is an aspiring ranger for the Kingdom of Garriven who had a happy life with another. When circumstances led them to separate, they were left with only half of their souls. But suddenly he gets a chance to fix his kingdom, which is at war... By bringing back the one ranger who can change everything...