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    青藍
    青藍
    aka 芷君

    如果有一種次元世界,任何人都觸摸不到,但其實一直與現實平衡存在。
    寫作是醫治自己的內心。 每一篇都是自己的歷練。

    如文字會生花
    也許明天會花開遍地

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3.1 家
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3.3兄妹
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4.1結果
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4.2心事
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4.3和好
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5.1 醉
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5.2 訓練
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6.1 邀約
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6.2 退出
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6.3 沒事
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6.4 差
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7. 1 逃
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7.2. 裙
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8.1 小丑
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9.2 失敗
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10.1 痛
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10.2 吻
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11.2 夢境
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12.1部分的全部
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12.2 冥冥之中
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12.3 表白
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12.4 風暴
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13.1 爭吵
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13.2 變
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14.2 音樂室
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16.2 決定
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17.1 明瞭
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17.2 愛你
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18.1 平安夜
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18.2 蝸牛
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19.2 離別的規矩
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20.1 同伴
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20.2 娑婆
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21.1 那故事倉猝結束不到氣絕便已安葬
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21.2 不記得
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22.1 遺憾
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22.2 魔女
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23. 十面埋伏
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24.Every ending is a new beginning.
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「我們……我們是好朋友,好兄弟。」文斯口欲言又止,她理解到自己多麼想黏著他,但恍惚事實不容許她內心蠢蠢欲動的幻想化成現實。
俊傑知道在她心目中的位置,儘管多麼不捨,也只能維持朋友關係,作為好兄弟互相扶持。

最後看著對方逐漸遠離,心痛並不是愛得太遲,而是把最後的一句埋葬於青春之間。
情感如同時間,錯過了,再也回不去。


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因打算用此故事參加角川的百萬小說大賽,於是開展了重修故事的旅程。
才發現之有很多參差不齊之處,現努力重修中。

2022/7


因為再次失業,決定把所有時間直接用來把故事砍掉重煉,故事大綱跟舊作差不太多,但情節和所有都是重新編寫。
只有不斷地寫著,恍惚把自己過去於現實間的錯誤,投放在故事中彌補修正,渴望得到原諒和救贖。
但願下輩子,我和他可以好好相處,直到永遠。

2022/8



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相遇
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背景
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#3
3.1 家
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3.2 操場
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3.3兄妹
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4.1結果
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4.2心事
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4.3和好
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5.1 醉
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5.2 訓練
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6.1 邀約
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6.2 退出
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6.3 沒事
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6.4 差
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10.1 痛
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10.2 吻
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11 1生理
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11.2 夢境
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12.1部分的全部
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12.2 冥冥之中
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12.3 表白
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12.4 風暴
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13.1 爭吵
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13.2 變
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14.1 門外
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14.2 音樂室
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15.1 酒吧
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15.2 秘密
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16.1 讓座
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16.2 決定
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17.1 明瞭
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17.2 愛你
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18.1 平安夜
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#42
18.2 蝸牛
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#43
19.1自毀的程序
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#44
19.2 離別的規矩
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#45
20.1 同伴
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20.2 娑婆
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#47
21.1 那故事倉猝結束不到氣絕便已安葬
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205 Reads
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21.2 不記得
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22.1 遺憾
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22.2 魔女
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#51
23. 十面埋伏
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#52
24.Every ending is a new beginning.
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#53
25. 後記-- 到底發生過什麼事
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195 Reads
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