I'd like to thank everyone who was able to submit an entry. You all did well and I hope that you all had great fun.564Please respect copyright.PENANAQpiReM7AW8
SilverSpoons: I've never experienced a heart attack before - as a man or a woman, lol - but it gave me and other readers a look at the creeping effects. The fact that most people don't know about the differences between a man and a woman having a heart attack is a scary thing in itself! I was confused right along with the protagonist.
Shnuffleluv: As you've said, danger doesn't have to be real to scare you, but that doesn't make the feelings any more fake. You were able to nicely describe the protagonist's feelings to the narrator. Great job!564Please respect copyright.PENANAWRvkqT4Dnb
XXJoetXX: You touched on every sense you possibly could, painting a disturbing and lively mosaic of scenes. Keep up the good work!
I'm a little busy at this moment, but I hope to have everyone's prizes finished before the end of the month!
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