Finish Amon off (pause)
When the scene fades back in, we see not much as changed since we last left it, with Amon and his Equalists getting away and Y/n on his knees. We can see has Y/n starts gritting his teeth as Amon is on his ship and getting ready to leave. This causes Y/n to try and stand up, but then he fell to his knees again.
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Y/n: "shit, im to tired. Oh, well. I do need to take it easy. Besides-" he then looks up at the blimps, "not sure how im going to take those things down, anyways. Well, not with something that will expose me that it........ but-" with his eyes, he looks past the blimps and sees some clouds beginning to form, "i know a substitute that will look like a natural disaster. An act of the spirits if you will........ good. Looks like there's some good cloud coverage. It'll cause minimal damage to the city since it won't be at full power." he then looks around and sees that almost all of the civilians are now gone, leaving only a few stragglers left, "good, now i can focus the blast towards the arena." his right hand begins to emit some electricity, "alright, im low on chakra and my body is pushed to its limits. Luckily this jutsu doesn't require much chakra or movement to preform. i know the signs thanks to the fact i was with Team 7 when they went on their mission to discover the Akatsuki spy." he then starts to weave some signs, causing more electricity to form around his right hand.
Y/n: he then lands on the final sign, "alright, here it goes. Goodbye, Amon and your so-called Equalists." he then slowly raises his hand up, "i promised i'd would go down this route if i had to and you forced my hand. Now Kir-/ KORRA!!!"
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When the boy looked up, he could see that Korra has been propelled up towards the blimps thanks to Lin. In a panic, Y/n tries to stand up but when he does, he instantly falls to his hands and knees.
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Y/n: "wait, i know i used a lot of chakra and i stressed out my body but not to this extent. Plus, with the amount of chakra pills i've-"
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The boys eyes then widen as he has a flashback to not that long ago. The trap that was set for him, having to save Asami, then having to save and protect the civilians. Then he notices Amons usually calm demeanor despite just how out classed he is against the boy. Y/n then quickly looks at and looks at Amon to see him looking down at the boy. In a dramatic zoom in, we can see that Amons lower eyelids are slightly arched, giving the impression that he's letting out a small smile.
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Y/n: "Amon....... did he plan all of this?! Wait, does he know?....... no, i think he's just observing me and coming up with his own theories. Damn. He's a lot smarter than i gave him credit for. Looks like your more like Madara and Obito than i first thought. Shit, i need to think of something fast. i can't let Korra handle this all on her own. i know the police caption is up their with her but still. Come on body, move..... move!"
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The boy then tries to move again but, again, his body just won't let him get up at all. He was about to try again but this time, he heard a scream from above. When he quickly looked up, he can see an unconscious Korra getting thrown off of the blimp. In slow motion he saw her fall from the sky.
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Y/n: "KORRA!!/ Screw it. I don't care anymore. i'll just deal with the consequences later./First Gate: The Gate of Opening, OPEN!!.....bleghhh!" he then began to spat up some blood, but he regained himself, "this isn't enough. i need more power!/ Second Gate: The Gate of Healing, OPEN!!!" suddenly, pressure began to build around him as his muscles began to ungulate and bulge, "grrrr, one..... one more. I've never gone past the second but i have to make sure im not seen./ i need to do this. To..... to.... to protect ones own ninja way!/ now, Third Gate: The Gate of Life, OPEN!!!!"
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* 0:21
* repeat if needed
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As soon as he yelled that at the top of his lungs, blue whips of chakra surrounded him until it turns into a pillar of pressurized air that shoots into the air. Then his skin begins to turn red, his veins began to bugle, his muscles get slightly bigger and his pupils disappeared. When he looked up he saw Korra still falling, then he saw Lin tried to help her but was getting blocked by the Lieutenant. In slow motion, he looked around and saw that some equalists were still around about to strike some police officers, or they are trying to get away. In that instant, he crouched down and disappeared. His movement was so fast and powerful, that it caused nearly half of the stage to explode off and break apart, the piece just barely missing Mako and Bolin, who were still down below.
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Mako: tries to cover his eyes from the debris and rubble, "woah, what the hell was that?!"
Bolin: does the same as his brother but then remembers he's an Earth bender, forming an earth wall to protect them, "i don't know, but it was scary!"
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Back at the stands, right before one of the officers was critically hit by an equalist, his attackers face was suddenly planted into the concrete floor with such speed and force that it happened near instant, even faster than he could blink. When he looked, he saw the equalist was face planted into the floor. When he looked around at his fellow officers, he saw multiple instances of the same thing but in different positions. When we look at Tenzin, we can see him dealing with an equalist until another came from behind. However, Tenzin didn't see this until he heard a crashing like noise from behind him.
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Tenzin: "what in the heavens?"
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When he looked behind him, we saw an equalist face planted into a human shaped hole in the wall, as rubble still falls from him. In shock, he looked around to see who caused it but all around him, he heard similar hard impact like noises, as if mini explosions were going off. He saw multiple equalists getting face planted instantly by some invisible force. Then he heard a loud crashing noise behind him again but this time it was a section of the seats getting destroyed by something but nothing was there. Back at Y/n, we can see as he just leapt from behind Tenzin and reaches Korra in mere milliseconds, holding her bridal style. He then looked down at her with a solemn look on his face, but then intense pain coursed throughout his body, forcing him out of the eight gates state. He was just barely able to remain conscious, with one eye open.
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Y/n: "my...... my body...... even the air...... hurts. It feels like breathing..... is poisoning me." he then flashes to Lee vs Gaara, "Lee....... just how in the hell did you withstand this? Its taking everything that i have to remain conscious and even that's failing me." when he finally lands on the ground with a heavy thud, he quickly looks around, "good, looks like no one noticed me. Luckily i looked around first." however, in this pain filled state, it looks like he missed 2 in particular.
Korra: her eye then started to flutter open, she then looks up and notices the boy, "Y...... Y/n?" her eyes then fully open, "wha....... what happened?"
Y/n: pushing through the pain he looks at her with a smile, "finally awake, huh, sleepy head?"
Korra: "oh will you shu........ wait." she then slowly looks down and notices how he's holding her, this causes her whole face to turn red, "uh, Y/n? Why are you holding me like this?"
Y/n: "oh, i needed a way to save you but also a way to take on the brunt of the-" suddenly his whole body began to feel unimaginable pain, as if its very muscles were trying to escape from his body, but can't get through the skin, blood begins to leak from his eyes, and his ears "ARGHHHHHH!!!!"
Korra: she then gets off of him and looks at him with panic written all over her face, "Y/N!!"
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Suddenly Y/n spat out enough blood to fill up the average sized cup. Then he falls to his side as his body twitches in pain. This caused Korra to quickly get to his side and lean over him.
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Korra: "Y/n! Y/n! Come on, speak to me! Y/n!"
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With his eyes just barely open, and his vision turning red, he can just barely see Korras fearful expression as tears run down her cheeks. He can see her yelling at him, but can't hear what she's saying anymore. With his eyes, he just barely looks behind her to see Amon staring down at him with his hands behind him back.
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Amon: "mm." he then walks away and into the blimp.
Y/n: "Amon....... was all of this..... a test? Were you....... testing my limits or were you trying to figure out my weaknesses?" his eyes then slowly began to close, "shit......... looks like....... i ........ under....... estimated....... you........"
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As the boys body goes limp, his consciousness finally fades, with the only thing he can just barely hear was Korra crying out his name until everything fades to black.
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Stop Music
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Recovery Period
Now nothing was left but emptiness and darkness, the low sounds of medal clanging can just barely be heard. Then the sounds of something being cut, screams of pain, explosions, flesh being ripped and cut is all that fills the air. Then the loud sounds of a haunting roar replaces it all.
* 0:18 - 0:24
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Y/n then quickly shoots his eyes open and gets up just as fast. With his breath labored, he looks around in a panic. When he sees that he's in his room, he begins to calm down. When he looks down, he can see Korra resting her head on his arms, which was resting on the edge of the bed. He can tell by her slow and calm breathing that she was fast asleep. He looks at her with a soft smile on his face. He then takes notices of the bandages on his arms and judging from the feeling on his head and chest, he had some on there too. He can still feel some residual pain but not as much as he would've thought. He looks back at Korra and smiles at her cute sleeping face. Suddenly the urge to pet her head overcomes him. Unable to resist its call, he slowly reaches out and softly pets her head. This sudden contact wakes her up as she begins to fidget, and her eyes flutter open but then close again.
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Korra: "mmmm? Five more minutes."
Y/n: "sorry, didn't mean to wake you."
Korra: her head instantly jolts up with her eyes wide open. "Y/n!" she then instantly hugs him tightly, "your awake!"
Y/n: "owowowow!"
Korra: she then lets go of him with a blush on her face, "sorry. So how are you feeling?"
Y/n: "still some pain, but I'm better now." he then looks to his side and notices a small bowl of water. This causes him to smile, "i take it, thanks to you."
Korra: she then blushes some more, "m-maybe."
Y/n: "so, how long was i out?"
Korra: "only for a few days."
Y/n: "a few days, huh? Damn, sorry abo-" suddenly Korra hugs him again and buries her head into his shoulder, "K-Korra?" he then could feel her trembling on him, "Korra?"
Korra: "don't you ever do that again. You had me so worried about you. When blood started to come out of your ears and eyes, then you vomited all that blood and fell to the floor. You......... you wouldn't wake up. I thought....... I thought." she then began to sob a little on his chest.
Y/n: he then wraps one of his arms around her waist and the other rests on the back of her head, "sorry about the Korra. Looks like i caused you trouble again."
Korra: she then looks up at him with tears in her eyes, "damn right you did! Do you have any idea of how worried i was about you?! How scared i was?!" she then buried her head into his chest again and begins to hit his shoulders, "stupid, stupid, stupid!" she then stops hitting him and grips his shirt around his shoulders, "I've never seen you that hurt before. You always felt so unstoppable. No matter what anyone threw your way, you always got out of it with barely a scratch. Seeing you like that-" her grip tightens even more, "it scared me. i thought...... i was going to lose you."
Y/n: "hey, hey." he then lifts up her chin using his fingers, "I'm not going anywhere. I can promise you that."
Korra: "do...... do you promise."
Y/n: "i promise....... huh?"
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When the boy looked closer, he noticed just how close her face was. When she saw how he was looking at her, she then noticed how close his face was. Then, blushes formed on both of their faces, but they couldn't look away. As they continued to stare at each other, into each other's eyes, they felt their hearts beat faster and faster. However-
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Meelo: burst through the door with his usual energy, "wake up sleepy head!!"
Y/n & Korra: they almost literally jumped out of their skins in fear, "EHHHHH!"
Ikki: she then leans over from behind the door frame, "what were you 2 doing?"
Both: "nothing!"
Ikki: "really? Then why are you 2 so close? And why is your faces so red?"
Korra: "b-because..... we were...... i was........ oh, i was checking his bandages. Yeah, that's it. i was checking his bandages."
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On the other side of the door frame, Jinora can be seen leaning backwards and into view. She then looks at them with a raised eyebrow, almost as if she doesn't believe their story at all.
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Tenzin: he then walks up from behind his kids, "what's with all the noi-" he then looks at the room and breathes a sigh of relief, "oh, thank the spirits. You're awake. You had use worried son."
Y/n: "yeah, sorry about that."
Tenzin: "so how are you feeling?"
Y/n: "better, thanks to Korra and her healing hands." this causes Korra to blush hard and panic slightly due to his wording.
Tenzin: "well that's good." this causes Korra to breathe a sigh of relief when no one reacted to his wording, "i knew your curse and put your body under extreme stress but i never would've expected it could do that to you."
Y/n: "y-yeah. i guess i used more stamina than i thought. Looks like i over did it trying to protect everyone." causing him to rub the back of his head and nervously chuckle.
Tenzin: "well, be more careful next time. I've never seen Korra so worried before. You should've seen her. She-"
Korra: "Tenzin!"
Tenzin: "opp, did i say too much? What is it you kids say? 'My bad'." this causes her to pout with her cheeks puffed and him to chuckle at her, "anyways, lunch is ready. So why don't you join us Y/n. I'm sure your famished."
Y/n: "well-" suddenly the sounds of his stomach growing can be heard by everyone. This causes him to blush, "i guess you have your answer."
Tenzin: "indeed."
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[Destiny Universe]
* A/n: ha! Thought i forgot, huh?
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Zavala: he then lets out a loud sneeze. This causes him to stand up and draw his sword with a crazed look, "that's it!"
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We then see as Ikora and Cayde-6 quickly grab onto his arms to hold him back.
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Zavala: "let me go! Let me goooo! Let me at them! I don't know were they are but they'll taste my blade!"
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[Avatar Universe]
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We now see as Tenzin, his family, Korra and Y/n sitting at the dinning table. We can see as Korra was sitting beside Y/n, like always, but this time it was to help him move around. Even with Korras healing water technique, the effects of using the eight gates still put a lot of strain on his body, especially internally. As they continued to eat, Korra decided to speak up.
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Korra: "so Tenzin. What happened back at the arena anyways?"
Tenzin: "huh? What do you mean?"
Korra: "i heard some of the equalists that Y/n defeated managed to get back up and continue fighting. Then before any of them could kill the cops, they suddenly got defeated by some invisible force." in the background Y/ns eyes widen as he sucked in his food and his lips remained sucked in.
Tenzin: "oh that. We're not sure what did it. Even the defeated equalists didn't know. However, before we could question them anymore. The transportation party can ambushed and all of the equalists that we captured, were set free."
Korra: she then slams her fist on the table, "you got to be kidding me. Every time we get close to a win. Amon is one step a head."
Tenzin: "yes, its..... troubling with how smart he's proving to be..... which reminds me. Y/n, i saw something odd in the arena."
Y/n: starts to internally panic, "o-oh and what was that?"
Tenzin: "before i got attacked, i saw steam somehow coming off of you. What was that?" this causes Y/n to panic and sweat profusely.
Y/n: he then starts to eat his food quickly, "y-you d-don't say./ don't panic, don't panic, DON'T PANIC!!"
Tenzin: "i couldn't get a good look but i could've sworn i saw your skin turn red."
Y/n: "I'M PANICKING!!/ a-are you sure?"
Tenzin: "yes. i may be old, but my vision is still impressive....... for the most part."
Y/n: starts to eat more in order to stall for time, "fuck fuck fuck. i was too reckless but i could've sworn i didn't see anyone looking. Shit, shit! Okay, think, think! i could excuse a lot of my tricks and Justus but steam and me skin turning-" he then has a flash back to Asami with her vehicles, "that's it./ do you guys know what doping is?" this causes some of them to nod but the kids.
Meelo: "what's-"
Pema: instantly covers his mouth, "your to young."
Y/n: "well it's the same thing..... sorta. We ninjas have a technique that allows use to increase our heart rate to near inhuman speeds. This increases how blood flow, allowing more oxygen to move around quicker. This gives us a temporary boost in speed and strength. It's a forbidden technique due to the stress it puts us through and possible death. As for the steam and red skin, it's because of this increase in blood flow. It causes our bodies to heat up and admit steam./ tho i can only normally use the second gate. Not sure how i opened the 3rd one."
Tenzin: he begins to rub his beard, "i see. Interesting but if it does that to your body, why do it at all?"
Y/n: "we're ninja. We need to survive dangerous and often grueling situations. So we do what we can./ that and the whole child soldier thing./ course not a lot of people know about it anymore, even fewer can use it. It requires intense focus, strict training and determination. As well as a declaration to protect ones ninja way."
Korra: "ninja way?"
Y/n: "It's also known as a Nindo. It's like a personal rule that we all live by, think of it like a motto, belief or a dream we hold. It's a vow to keep that alive. It's basically a motivation to keep going and stay alive. To push past the pain. Cause that's what it means to be a ninja. Those who endure the pain and continue moving forward."
Tenzin: "i see. i guess it makes sense for ninja to hold onto a vow of some kind. With how much they put their lives on the line."
Y/n: "y-yeah./ good. i managed to steer the conversation away from the arena. Cant let them ask too many questions or connect to many dots. It's a good thing i paid attention to Asami when she was explaining how her vehicles work and how steam power is used. Even if its by a little, my world could really benefit from this worlds tech./ on, that reminds me. How's Asami doing? I'm sure the whole ordeal effected her."
Korra: "well, she's tough. So she's doing fine."
Y/n: "i see. So how is everyone doing anyways?"
Korra: "fine, but sadly they had to shut down the pro bending arena. They viewed it as a public safety risk or something dumb like that. Mako and Bolin are living with Asami as she agreed to take them in until they find a new home."
Y/n: "well, that's good........ about them being okay i mean, not the whole pro bending being closed thing but let me guess who's brilliant idea that was." causing Korra to roll her eyes and groan but almost on cue-
Tarrlok (radio): --"citizens of Republic City i would like to speak about these....... troubling times. Although the hundred-year war as long since passed, we are not living in times of peace. These terrorists disguising themselves as revolutionaries by calling themselves 'equalists' are not interested in true equality at all. They only want to wage war against benders. Our esteemed chief Beifong was supposed to be our protector, to protect this great city. However, she was powerless to stop Amon vicious attack on the pro bending arena. She has failed us all. If we are to survive these dire times, our law enforcement needs new leadership."--
Y/n: "tch, figured he would spin this bullshit."
Ikki: "you really hate that bad man, don't you?"
Pema: "hate is such a strong word dear, but it's not like he hasn't given poor Y/n a reason to think good of him."
Y/n: "but i do hate him. i hated him ever since he put Korras life at risk to serve his own means. Before that, i just didn't trust him."
Korra: "lets change the subject from that-" looks at the kid, "butt head. Y/n why don't you come with me to visit Mako and Bolin at Asamis place. After you recovered more of course."
Y/n: "sure, besides after everything that happened. I want to check up on Asami to make sure she's okay."
Korra: "oh..... okay./ why did that hurt?"
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[Mini Timeskip]
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We now see as Y/n is standing at the top of the tower of the air bender temple. We can see as his eyes are closed, as if he was focusing on something.
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Y/n: "i need to get stronger. i underestimated Amon and that cost me. i thought he was just another villain that I've faced in the past, but he's not. My old tricks won't work on him. i need to be smarter than him, stronger than him. i need to get a handle on my chakra issue before its to late." with his eyes still closed, he lightly balls up his fists and puts them together, "if only i could absorb nature energy and actually use it. Is it because of my low chakra or my lack of proper training? Whatever the case may be, i need to figure it out. Sage mod will be a huge help in not only this fight but any other future threat Korra may face." he then starts to feel energy begin to get pulled closer towards him but as soon as it gets close, it disperses. This causes his eyes to open in anger, "damn! Why can't i do anything!"
Korra: "hey! Y/n!"
Y/n: he then looks down at the ground and sees Korra looking up at him, "hey Korra! What's up!"
Korra: "it's time to got to Asamis! Come on, before i leave you behind!"
Y/n: "oh right, i almost forgot. I'm coming!"
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The Cabbage Corp Exposed?
[Location: Cabbage Corp Warehouse]
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We now see a large factory of warehouses. As the camera pans over, we can see a flock of odd looking crows known as Lizard Crows. Then a police truck drives by, disturbing the flock and causing them to fly away. The truck speeds right past them and rams into the factories entrance.
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As it does so, some metal bender cops break through the windows and rip some crates open. When they do so, they find multiple equalist propaganda posters and electrical gloves.
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Lin: "looks like our intel was correct."
Saikhan: "there's enough evidence here to bury the Cabbage Corp for all eternity."
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As Lin looks away, the scene now shifts to the outside of the Cabbage Corp building. We can see at the front of it was a large statue of the original cabbage merchant from all those years ago. Infront were multiple reporters shouting questions at Lin.
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Lau Gan-Lan: as he gets taken away into custody, "this is an outrage i tell you! I'm innocent!"
Saikhan: "yea yeah. That's what they all say."
Reporter: "is it true what they say? The Cabbage Corp is conspiring with the equalists?"
Lin: "the evidence would suggest that, but this is to an ongoing investigation. For the time being, we have frozen Mr Gan-Lans assets, and we're closing the Cabbage Corp."
Lau Gan-Lan: with tears in his eyes, "nooooo! Not my cabbage corp!" he then gets dragged away by 2 office before getting put into a police vehicle.
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Time for a Race
[Location: Sato Manor]
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We now see an absolutely large mansion like building that looks more like a castle than a house.
As the camera pans into the building, we can see a large poll room with a nearly equally large pool in it. We then see as Asami, Mako, and Bolin either swimming or sitting by the pool. We then see a Pabu jumps off of the large statue into the pool below it. Bolin then stands on top of the same statue. As the camera pans over, we can see as Asami is sitting on the side of the pool while Mako stands in the pool right next to her.
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Bolin: "earth bending bomb!"
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Bolin then jumps off of the statue and belly flops into the water, splashing Mako and Asami in the process. We then see as a butler escorts Korra and Y/n into the room right as Bolin resurfaces.
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Butler: "avatar Korra and the ninja Y/n........ have arrived my lady."
Mako: raises one of his arms, "hey guys!"
Asami: "glad you 2 could make it!"
Bolin: pops out of the water again but with his hands up in the air, "welcome to paradise!" he then puts his hands behind his head and floats on the waters surface. Then Pabu jumps onto his belly.
Korra: she then sits down on one of the benches by the pool, followed by Y/n, "looks like you 2 really settled in."
Mako: he then starts to swim towards the pair with Asami not to far behind him, "pretty much yeah..... except for the part were a certain someone forgot to ask her father if we could stay first."
Asami: she then manages to finally catch up to him, "yeah but i managed to smooth him over to it. It's easier to ask for forgiveness than permission."
Y/n: "yeahhh, not really sure that tracks." causing her to giggle.
Bolin: he then gets out of the pool right next to Korra and Y/n with Pabu on his shoulder, "this place is the greatest in the world! Watch this." he then says in a more formal voice, "fetch me my towel good sir."
Butler: "yes, master....... Bolin."
Bolin: "master Bolin! Ha, i love this guy." he then holds up his arms, "now pat me dry."
Butler: "as you wish, sir." he then starts to pat him dry, while Bolin moves around as he does so.
Bolin: "don't forget about master Pabu."
Butler: "wouldn't dream of it sir."
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He then puts the towel over Pabu, who was now sitting on Bolins head, and begins to rub his dry. Moments later, Pabus fur becomes bushy as he squeaks. The Butler then turns around as Bolin jumps into the water again. This causes the butler to quietly groan in annoyance.
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Asami: gets near the pair while still in the water, "so Y/n. How's your injuries?"
Y/n: he then flexes a little with a smile, "right as rain." he then winches a little before rubbing his arm, "more or less. Thanks to Korra."
Mako: "still, I've never seen you like that dude. Honestly, i thought you were invincible."
Asami: "i know what you mean, but it says something when these equalist guys have yet to hurt him themselves. It was self-inflicted."
Y/n: "wait, you know about that?"
Asami: "hehe, don't underestimate a genius. i saw the steam coming off of your body that day. It's not that hard to figure out what was happening. Scary to think you could do that this whole time, but it doesn't make sense it would have such a huge drawback."
Y/n: "y-yeah./ fuuuuuuuck. Now i have to be careful around her too. i knew she was smart but not to that extent. I'm letting my guard down way too often. If im not careful, they'll eventually figure me out."
Korra: "don't worry. i already gave him the third degree."
Asami: "good. Don't want my favorite ninja boy getting hurt like that again."
Mako: "hey."
Asami: "awww, what's wrong, jealous?" she then boops him on the nose with her finger, "your still my number one." she then kisses him on the lips, which he gladly returns, "but last i checked, you're not a ninja."
Mako: "i could if i wanted to."
Y/n: "fat chance man." he then looks at him with a cocky smirk.
Mako: he then softly chuckles, "heeeey, whose side are you one anyways?"
Y/n: "my own."
Korra: "anyways. So what's the plan for today Asami? Let me guess, shopping, makeovers....."
Bolin: he then jumps out of the water and onto Mako, pushing him into the water in the process. He then raises his hand, "ooo, oooooh! i vote we do makeovers!" Mako then comes out of the water and does the same to Bolin that was done to him.
Asami: she then climbs out of the pool while using the ladder and heads towards the pair, "i had something more exciting in mind."
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[Mini Timeskip]
[Location: Sato Racetrack]
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We then see a large racetrack that looks to be professionally made. We then see as 2 Satomobiles are racing against each other. As the camera pans over, we can see as Asami, Korra, Y/n, Mako, and Bolin were sitting on the stands, which the whole race go down.
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Asami: "pretty cool, huh?"
Korra: she could barely contain her excitement, "this is way cooler than a makeover!"
Y/n: "as if you needed one tho./ yea, It's pretty amazing./ tho, now that i think about it. If i really tried, i might be able to run that fast.......... actually, a lot of us can with our chakra."
Asami: "this is where future industries test drive our Satomobiles...... have either of you been behind the wheel before?"
Korra: "the only thing i know how to drive is a polar bear dog."
Asami: "and what about you Mr ninja?"
Y/n: "mmmmmm." he then has a flashback to when he drove the equalist truck and nearly killed them all with fear alone, "n-no, not really."
Asami: "really?"
Y/n: "im a ninja, we don't really need vehicles. Can't really be stealthy if we make sounds nearly as loud a thunder now can we?"
Asami: "that's a fair point." she then looks at Korra, "so, what me to take you out for a spin?"
Y/n: "now that's sounds naughty."
Korra: "yeah, let's do it!"
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We now see as 2 Satomobiles are sitting beside each other. We can see as Korra puts on some goggles as she sits behind Asami. The camera then pans over to the side, we can see a man sitting in the other car. We then see as a man wearing a blue jumpsuit walking in front of them. He then stops just about in between them and raises up a white flag into the air. Right when he quickly lowered his arm, the pair of racers slam on their gas peddles. This causes their tires to screech on the pavement before shooting forward. As they race a crossed the pavement, we can see as Asami begins to fall behind, but she then smiles as she begins to catch up. As the camera pans over, we can see as Mako and Bolin are cheering from the sidelines. We can also see as Y/n looks on with excitement in his eyes, almost as if he wants to give it a try. Back at the race, we can see as Asami has overtaken the other racer, with their back wheels touching each other. This causes his car to sway a little, but he quickly regains control over his car. However, this small moment was enough for Asami to take the lead and win the race. Once she stops the car, both girls get out of their vehicle. With Asami taking off her helmet and shaking her head to allow her hair to sway in the wind.
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Korra: "that was amazing! I didn't think we'd make it."
Asami: "well, you can't be afraid to mix things up sometimes."
Korra: "i gotta admit, i had you pegged all wrong. i thought you were kind of...... prissy." she then half raises her hand, "no offense."
Asami: she then lets out a small chuckle, "It's all right. People usually assume im daddies helpless little girl but i can handle myself just fine. i even took self-defense classes since i was about this high." she then moves one of her hands to about the same height as her waist, "my dad wanted to make sure i could always protect myself."
Korra: "smart man."
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Hiroshis Secret
We now see into the Sato manor entrance way. The butler then opens as the gang walks into the mansion with Bolin rushing past them while having his hands on his crotch.
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Bolin: "emergency, emergency. Coming through, beep beep!"
Y/n: "man has no self-control....... or dignity."
Asami: "really big guy? Surely even you would struggle holding it in."
Y/n: "hah! You'd be surprised. We ninja need to be ready to fight at all times. We've trained ourselves to hold it in for hours, even a day if we needed to. Tho some of us struggled with that part." he then has a flashback to kid Naruto doing the same as Bolin.
Korra: "why am i not surprised. Anyways-" she then looks at Asami, "do you have another bathroom i could use?"
Asami: "sure, we have a ladies powder room upstairs." Mako then strands right beside her and puts his arm on her shoulder, "it's the first door to your right. You can freshen up in there."
Korra: "thanks." she then walks upstairs, leaving Mako, Asami and Y/n behind.
Y/n: he then looks at Asami, "so Asami." this causes her and Mako to look at him, "can we talk for a moment?"
Asami: "sure....... is it about your behavior the other day? You know, threatening to hurt those Wolfbat thugs." she then folds her arms with a raised eyebrow.
Y/n: "uh, will you just let it go already?"
Asami: she then lets out a small laugh, "sorry, i couldn't help it. Don't worry, me and Korra decided to drop it after everything that happened. But-" she then pokes his chest in a stern manner, "don't let it go to your head. We might not be so forgiving next time." she then folds her arms again but this time for real.
Y/n: "r-right."
Asami: "so what did you want to talk about?"
Y/n: "are you alright?"
Asami: "what do you mean?"
Y/n: "at the arena, what happened to you." she then flinches a little, even pitting her hand on her hand on her opposite arm, "its not easy thing to go through. i know your tough and i know you say your okay but are you really?" this causes her to look away.
Mako: "look, man. i get it, believe me, but if she says she's fine. Then she's fine."
Y/n: "the ones who insist that they are okay the most, are the ones who are hurting the most. It's something my sensei once said."
Mako: he then looks as if he's starting to get agitated, "look here-"
Y/n: "did you forget who you're talking to?" this causes Mako to stop, "I've faced my fair share of hardships and pain. I've faced people who were like Amon and those who are worse than him. Those with no heart or morals at all. Zabuza, the sound Shinobi, members of the sound and sand who attacked my village, Gaara, Kabuto, Orochimaru and the Akatsuki, just to name a few. i may not have won any of those fights, i even needed to be saved plenty of time but i lived. i know what It's like to be put into those types of situations. It's not an easy thing to go through. I've done the same thing that Asami is doing right now. So i'll ask again Asami. How are you doing, really?"
Asami: "i....." she then lets out a sigh and smiles, "man, It's hard to fool you Mr ninja but i guess i shouldn't be surprised with a past like that. Sure those names mean nothing to me but i know they mean a lot to you. They must be some bad people too." she then sighs again before putting her hands on her arms, as if to comfort herself, "im..... not okay. Being held captive like that and even tortured. Knowing i couldn't do a thing to break free, even seeing my fathers face. i...... i was so scared." Mako then hugs her, which she leans into, "not knowing what could happen next or if i would make it out. I haven't felt that way since my mother passed away, but then you saved me and i knew everything was going to be okay. Even when Amon had you seemingly out matched, even using me as a trap for you. You came out on top like it was nothing more than a typical Tuesday to you then........ you did that strange technique and got seriously hurt to save Korra. It was......" then a single tear ran down the side of her cheek, "scary, seeing you like that but-" she then looks up at him with a smile, "it also made me realize your just like the rest of us. Extraordinary sure but still just like everyone else. It kinda makes me feel closer to you, for some reason."
Y/n: this causes him to smile at her, "well, no matter what. I'll always be your friend but if you ever need to talk about anything. I'm always here." this causes her to smile back at him.
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We then see Korra walking through one of the many hallways of the manor. That is, until she hears some kind of noise coming from the door beside her. Letting her curiosity best her, she takes a look inside through the doors keyhole. Inside was a fancy looking office with a pretty big desk and tall chair. She can't see who's inside because of the height of the chairs backrest.
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???: "no, no i can assure you everything is going according to plan. Yes, luckily the Cabbage corp investigation has bought us sometime. Trust me, by the end of the week-" the man turns his chair to reveal him to be Mr Sato, Asamis so-called kind father, "we'll ve ready to strike." Korra, in shock, was about to leave but, "as for the boy." this stops her in her tracks, "don't worry. We're working on something to..... take care of him." she then looks at the door with an angered expression on her face, almost tempted to break into the room right now to kick his ass, "tho i don't approve of how my daughter was used as bait for him. You made me assurances that she would never be harmed......... whatever. Just never do it again." he then hangs up the phone slightly annoyed.
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Korra, using her brain for once, realizes she can't just burst in there without evidence, do to his position. So she has no choice but to run. We now see into the entrance way of the mansion were Bolin is being sprayed with perfume by the butler while Asami, Mako, and Y/n watches on. Out of nowhere, Korra comes rushing past them.
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Asami: "your leaving already? But..... i thought......."
Korra: she then quickly turns around, "oh, um. im sorry! i forgot im actually supposed to airsit-I mean babybend-I mean baby sit the air bender kids. See you later!" she was about to run but
Y/n: "hey wait up Korra." gets close to her, "what's going on?"
Korra: she turns around with an unsure smile, "nothing, i just got to go do something. That's all."
Y/n: "well, do you want me to come with you?"
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Korra then looks at him, trying to hide something but then has a flashback.
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Hiroshi: "as for the boy, don't worry. We're working on something to..... take care of him."
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This causes her expression to sadden, then she has a flashback to when he spat up blood and laying on the ground limp. She then pinches her hip hard and looks back at him with a smile.
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Korra: "nah, you can stay here. Don't worry. It's nothing. Hey, why don't you stay here for a while. To make sure Asami is okay. See yeah!" she then runs out the door with her head down.
Y/n: "y-yeah..... okay." he then looks at the others who look back just as confused.
Korra: while running down the stairs, her head remains down, but now we see tears running down her cheeks, "i'm so sorry Y/n, i'm so sorry." she then bites her limp, "but i can't lose you. Even if that means i have to push you away."
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[Location: Somewhere in Republic City]
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We now see somewhere in Republic City at the dead of night. Where ever this was, it had a good view of the city. As the camera pans down, we can see Tenzin, Lin, and Korra looking at each other as they discuss something important.
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Tenzin: "so you think Mr Sato was the one who built those gloves for the equalists? Then he framed the Cabbage Corp to hide his tracks?"
Lin: "that's one serious and bold accusation your throwing around kid. The kind you need proof to back up."
Korra: "well, i don't have any proof yet but i know what i heard. Sato is up to something. i know it."
Lin: "well, he does have the means to do so....... and the motive."
Tenzin: "oh, that's right."
Korra: she then looks at Lin with a raised eyebrow, "he does? What could that be?"
Tenzin: "about 12 years ago, the Agni Kai triad robbed the Sato mansion. A fire bender killed Satos wide during the break in."
Korra: "that's....... that's horrible."
Tenzin: "it was a tragedy. It's possible he's been harboring anti-bending ideals sense then."
Lin: "maybe..... we should look into him more closely."
Korra: "thanks....... but...... i-we need to keep Y/n out of it."
Lin: "and why's that? Given how close you 2 are. I figured you want him with you every step of the way."
Korra: "oh....... uh....... just cause. He's still injured so i don't want him to get to stressed over it."
Tenzin: he then places his hand on her shoulder, "Korra, what aren't you telling us?"
Korra: she wanted to lie but couldn't. Her body begins to tremble as she remembers that day again, "cause Mr Sato threatened Y/ns life." this shocks Tenzin
Lin: "he did? You heard that?"
Korra: "not in so many word, but he did say 'as for the boy, don't worry. We're working on something to take care of him'. I don't know about you, but that sounded like a threat to me."
Tenzin: "no, your right but is that all?"
Korra: she then pinches her leg and forces a smile, "yeah, im just worried about him." Tenzin narrows his eyes as he can see her pinching her leg but chooses not to press on.
Lin: she then crosses her arms, "but he's pretty capable for a brat. We all saw what he could do during the raid on the bending arena. i doubt any non-bender is a match for him. Besides, their primarily weapon is those electro gloves, and we all saw how little they affected him."
Korra: "i know that....... but...."
Tenzin: he then puts both of his hands on her shoulders and smiles, "It's alright. We'll try our best to make sure he's not involved....... where is he anyways?"
Korra: "oh, i told him to stay with Asami to keep an eye on her for a little while. i knew he was worried about her and since he has experience with this sorta thing. I figured he would want to stay back anyways."
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[Location: Sato Manor]
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We then see the Sato Mansion yet again but this time from the front door. We then see as the butler opens the door to see a police officer waiting there.
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Officer: "good morning, sir. i heard Mr L/n was at this residence. Is that true?"
Butler: "it is but may i inquire what this is about? He is an honored guest of the Satos after all." in the background we can see as Mako, Asami and Bolin lean over from behind the butler.
Officer: "we just have some follow-up questions for him. It's about the attack on the bending arena. Its just formalities you see."
Asami: she then walks up to the butler and crosses her arms, "really? You do realize he was out cold right? That he saved everyone but know you want to question him?"
Officer: "i know how it looks, but this is nothing more than a formality. He'll be released shortly."
Asami: "how about you-"
Y/n: he then puts his hand on her shoulder, "It's alright Asami. He's just doing his job. Besides, it's just a few questions. i think i can handle that."
Asami: "but-"
Y/n: he lets out a soft smile, "hehe, it's alright." he then looks at the officer, "alright, what is it you wanted to talk about?"
Officer: "if it's alright with you, can we do this at the police station?"
Y/n: he then raises an eyebrow, "what for? I'm fine with being here."
Officer: "given what you've been through. We figured it would be in your best interest. We also have doctors to give you a proper medical examination to make sure your okay. It's the least we can do for what you've done for us/"
Y/n: "alright, that's fine." he then looks behind him and at the others, "alright guys, I'll see you later."
Asami: "y-yeah."
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The officer then walks away with Y/n not far behind. The others look on with worry on their faces but Asami narrows her eyes.
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Asami: "something isn't right."
Mako: "what do you mean?"
Asami: "call it a gut feeling."
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Back with Y/n, we can see as he is being led by the officer to their police type Satomobile. He then looks behind him and towards the Sato Mansion. He then side eyes the officer walking beside him and sees he's not looking at him. So he then reaches into his ninja tool pouch and takes out a shuriken. With the officer still not looking, Y/n then throws the toll high into the air. When they reached the police vehicle, the officer opens the door for him and closes it when the boy enters it. The officer then walks to the other side and gets into the driver's seat. Right when the vehicle drives off, the shuriken lands in the yard some distance away. Then it explodes into a puff of smoke. When the smoke clears, it reveals to be a shadow clone of Y/n, who was crouched down in a hero landing like position. He then quickly looks around and sees no one is looking, so he quickly ninja dashes into some bushes. He then maneuvers around until he reaches close to the front door. Then he notices Korra, Tenzin, and Lin standing at the front door.
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Clone Y/n: "what are you up to Korra?" he then preforms that Dog → Boar → Ram hand signs, "transform."
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Then a puff of smoke surrounds the clone before revealing him to be an eagle. He then flies up to a nearby tree and looks around, to see them not looking in his direction. He then flies down to the ground and lands close to the mansion. He then sneakily walks towards the wall of the mansion. Right as he gets close, he notices Lin about to look in his direction. In a panic he runs to the wall and hides behind a pillar like structure on the wall that hides his figure.
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Tenzin: "what are you looking at?"
Lin: "thought i saw something...... nevermind."
Clone Y/n (eagle): up against the wall with is wings spread out and panic on the eagles face, "that was a close one. Forgot how on guard Lin can be."
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When he peaks over, he sees as the trio is being led inside. Then another puff of some surround him and when it clears, its reveal he is now a rat. With Korra being the last one, she suddenly stops and right when the smoke fully cleared, she looks in his direction with a raised eyebrow. She then shrugs her shoulder before continue to walk inside of the mansion. When the camera pans over, we can see the clone of Y/n basically hugging the wall again. When he looks, he sees that she is now gone. This causes him to breathe a sigh of relief, but then he notices the door is being closed. He then rushes to the door and managed to get past them without anyone seeing him. Once inside, he then climbs up a pillar and stops at the little ledge that's at the top. He then peaks over from behind the pillar and looks down at the others.
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Mako: he then stops Korra from walking past him as the other 2 continue to walk on, "what's going on here? Why are they asking Hiroshi more questions? And why are you here, shouldn't you be with Y/n? The police took him away for some questioning." both him and Asami notice she didn't even flinch, not even an ounce of worry on her face.
Asami: "you know...... don't you?"
Korra: "I don't know what you mean."
Asami: gets close to her while looking annoyed, "then why aren't you with him? I thought you cared about him." she then looks into Korras eyes and saw how almost dead they looked, "Korra?"
Korra: she then steels her resolve, "he's not important right now." this shocks the others greatly, they couldn't believe what they are hearing right now, luckily the clone didn't hear this as he was too far away, "what is important is that i overheard Mr Sato on the phone yesterday. Asami, i don't know how to tell you this but..... i think your father might be involved with the equalists."
Asami: "what?! You can be serious!" she then walks upstairs in anger.
Mako: "you spy on Hiroshi? And now you say Y/n being questioned by the police in his condition isn't important? What's your problem!" he then follows being Asami in anger as well.
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In the background, we can see as the clone of Y/n traverses the mansion walls but using its own architecture as footholds. We now see into Hiroshis office, where Lin and Tenzin stands in front of him while he can be seen sitting on his desk.
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Lin: "Mr Sato, we just have some follow-up questions to ask of you."
Asami: she then bursts through the door by slamming them open "my father is innocent! Just because we're not benders doesn't mean we support those awful equalists or did you forget what they did to me?"
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We then see as Mako and Korra enter into her fathers office as well. In the background, we can see the clone of Y/n has snuck in and has hid himself in a nearby plant.
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Hiroshi: "equalists?" Asami then stands right next to him, "is that what this is all about? i can assure you i have nothing to do with those radicals or did you forget what they did to my daughter?...... right in front of me."
Clone Y/n (rat): he then peaks over by moving one of the leaves, "Korra, what are you doing?"
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Lin then looks over her shoulder and at the plant. In a panic he quickly moves the leaf back in place before she could see and does his best to hide within the plants shadows. She glares at the plant for a few moments before looking back at Hiroshi. This then causes the clone of Y/n to breathes a sigh of relief.
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Mako: he then looks right at Korra, "yeah, you don't know what your talking about Korra."
Korra: she then points at Hiroshi, "i overheard you saying the Cabbage Corp investigation had bought you some time and that you're getting ready to strike. And how you'll......" they look at her in confusion why she stopped, but then she bites her lips, "'take care of' Y/n. Now explain that!" this caused Asami to twitch a little while Mako just lets out a scoff.
Hiroshi: "haha! This whole thing is one big misunderstanding, resulting from the young avatars overactive imagination. Course she's been through a lot so i don't blame her for being a little jumpy and quick to accuse. My number one competitor was just knocked out of the game. It provides me with the opportunity to 'strike' at the market with a new line of Satomobiles." this causes Lin to avert her eyes, "It's just business, nothing nefarious." this causes Tenzin and Lin to look at each other.
Clone Y/n (rat): leans over again. "How is a food processing company a competitor to a company who makes vehicles? Oh wait, i remember Asami saying something about them getting into vehicles as well. The founder used to do the foodstuff."
Korra: "then what about your threat towards Y/n?"
Hiroshi: "you mean my daughters' savior? Course i want to take care of him, anything he may need. He did save my daughter after all. What father wouldn't want to reward their daughters savior and protector?"
Tenzin: "in order to put all these suspicions to rest, might we have a look around your factories and warehouses?"
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Asami then sighs in annoyance and puts her hands on her hips. She looks as if she was about to say something but then her father raises his hand in order to stop her from doing so.
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Hiroshi: "if you feel its necessary to clear my name, then your welcome to search all of future industries. We have nothing to hide."
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[Location: Somewhere in Republic City]
[Sunset]
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We then see into a different part of Republic city as the sun gets ready to go down the horizon. As the camera pans around, we can see as Y/n is walking around with his hands in his pockets. As he continues to walk, he couldn't help but think about something.
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Y/n: "yeah I knew something was up. His line of questions was just odd. It felt like he was stalling for time. i'll give him credit tho. Not once did he flinch or give any sign that something was up. For all intents and purposes, he was just a man doing his job. My shadow clone is still following Korra around, so i don't know what information he has gathered until he disappears." he then hears the sound of electricity going on somewhere, then followed by some screaming, "huh?"
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The boy then looks around until he can see a darkened alleyway. Right before he looked away from it, sparks of electricity can be seen from it, then the sound of someone screaming again. He then rushes towards it and when he reaches it, he can see a clocked figure holding a man by his neck as his body just hangs their limp. When Y/n gets a closer look at the man, he can see that his body is steaming as he remains unmoving. The boy the gets a better look at the figure and sees it's the same girl as before, but he saw her face was more serious than normal and even some blood running down her cheeks.
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Mysterious Girl: "it's you again. What do you want this time?"
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Then sparks of electricity emit from her body as she continues to glare at the boy. He then clenches his fist as determination emanates from his eyes.
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Y/n: "today's the day lady. Today i finally help you."
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- To Be Continued.
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A/n: welp, that's it for this chapter, did you like it? And yeah, i know, yet another cliffhanger but there was more i wanted to add, plus more going on with Korras side of things. So i had no choice but to end it here as it has already reached 7k in words....... and i haven't even done my quality check yet. It has now reached 10k words, so yeah, i had to stop. Now just before anyone complains, if anyone does. When it comes to your speed in gate 3. remember Lee was going so fast that they could barely see him, and he even seemingly was jumping off the air. These are normal people...... ish, they have no chakra nor means to see anything moving that fast. Also for why you saved the police before Korra....... that was my way of flexing his strength and speed. Plot wise it makes no sense, but it was purely to flex. i guess you could use the excuse you did it so Korra doesn't get hurt while your kicking ass or to better hide the fact it was you who did all that. Yes, they don't know it was you. All they know you saved Korra. Also, i know it may seem odd that i had you use 3rd gate when it was stated your chakra was low. As far is im aware, chakra levels don't affect your ability to use the eight gates. Just your bodies strength and endurance. If it doesn't then oops but its to late now. The reason you could use the 3rd gate was out of desperation to save Korra and to hide what you truly are. How you discovered the eight gates will be discussed later. Also, I know people might not like what im doing with Korra now, her trying to protect you by pushing you away, but personally it makes sense to me. Given what just happened. I'm doing my best to make these characters feel like people with emotions and understandable motives. I know i don't always do a good job of that, but I am trying. Anyways, that's all i can think of. So I'll see you....... in the next chapter.
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