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    Jackie Conners
    Jackie Conners
    Preserving the fire of creative passion

    I’ve written short stories featuring animals, mystery and fantasy but now I’m attempting to write a full book for the first time.
    I’m also on Wattpad, Booksie, Quotev and RoyalRoad.
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Lucky Comet
fantasy mystery fighting revenge secrets survival battle nature animals talking-animals rabbit valley wilderness xenofiction
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The Training
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When Comet reluctantly accepts an offer to go to Eden Valley, he finds himself in a world of magic, secrecy and danger. He has to master the powers of fortune while protecting the valley and making friends along the way.

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+This was my first attempt at long story/serial 


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#1
The Hole
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#2
The Intruders
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#3
The Journey
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#4
The Valley
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The Magia
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The Hare
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The Decision
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The Crow
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The Island
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The Assembly
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The Water
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#12
The Promise
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#13
The Truth
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#14
The Discovery
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The Tunnel
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The Thieves
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The Conspiracy
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The Foxes
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The Escape
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The Rebels
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The River
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The Return
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