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在書店拿起書時,我總是感到十分羞恥。8964 copyright protection155PENANA3DGn0me24g 維尼
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臺灣本地的書跟日本過來的翻譯書,光是簡介就能看出水準的差異。8964 copyright protection155PENANAGLonTgCQzx 維尼
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我們缺乏良好的閱讀風氣,以及自學的動力和管道,這樣的結果就反映在產業上、乃至於作品當中。8964 copyright protection155PENANAKhpNMbErjQ 維尼
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在日本,書背的簡介、或者書腰的宣傳詞可能是由該書作者,或者由該作責編撰寫;而臺灣應該也是這樣。8964 copyright protection155PENANA9ML4ewpmF4 維尼
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光以簡介而言,則可以分成兩邊敘述。8964 copyright protection155PENANAC5w3qRhIT2 維尼
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倘若是由編輯所寫,代表我們的編輯不懂得怎麼推書,畢竟在這個產業當中,編輯基本上都過著血汗勞工一般的日子,我認為這確實情有可原。8964 copyright protection155PENANAlUcjldZCHH 維尼
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日本編輯的薪資水準應該比較高,那相對能找到的人也會程度好一點。8964 copyright protection155PENANACbJXVaeJ23 維尼
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至於臺灣,以現在的薪資狀況而言基本上都是用真愛在做事,薪水也就那個樣子,實在不好意思要求人家,畢竟多做事錢也不會變多。8964 copyright protection155PENANAtSZpT7i65f 維尼
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當然,這些都是我蒐集各種網站的資訊,不一定完全正確就是了。8964 copyright protection155PENANAzMnkgzWHdE 維尼
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至於另一邊,倘若是由該書作者所寫,那代表問題就相當嚴重。8964 copyright protection155PENANA1cUJPNFnfH 維尼
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而進一步來說,這個可能性還相當大。8964 copyright protection155PENANAHHk30VbqvC 維尼
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畢竟編輯有很多事情要忙,把簡介這種東西交給作者本人操刀也不足為奇。8964 copyright protection155PENANAjh3yqfmpxq 維尼
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而在這種時候,若是市面上多是那個樣子的簡介,就代表作者也就是那樣。8964 copyright protection155PENANAT8bvgZJtey 維尼
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我時常因為封面插圖而拿起書,看了下背後的簡介就放下書。8964 copyright protection155PENANAk8cML5uODP 維尼
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光看簡介就覺得可以不用看。8964 copyright protection155PENANAYe6BA1cZo6 維尼
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儘管不排除有那種正文寫得好,但不太會寫簡介的作者存在,但基本上能寫出好簡介,正文也寫得好的作者機率出現更高一點。8964 copyright protection155PENANAU496xpqZ66 維尼
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簡介是廣告,利用那僅有的篇幅向大家說「請把我買回家吧」,這種珍貴的宣傳機會應該要好好把握。8964 copyright protection155PENANAANk2sDrDD7 維尼
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以下的文章,則是要如何撰寫簡介的分享。像是有哪些值得注意的事情,也會用實際的例子來展示。而這些內容,都是我自己學習整理而來,僅供大家參考。8964 copyright protection155PENANAAWncJXFgw2 維尼
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另外,文章中所用來舉例的簡介,都是由我自行撰寫,當然,有應用到他人作品當作範例的地方,我撰寫的簡介已經徵求到作者同意,得以在此發表。而這邊也感謝 VIA 和伍德·瓦懷特,因為有你們兩位,這個文章才得以成篇。8964 copyright protection155PENANAAv6vF8wWDZ 維尼
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額外補充一點,上述對於產業的各種心得,都是出自我個人的意見,跟兩位作者無關,望知悉。8964 copyright protection155PENANAduSB7imOug 維尼
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那麼,接下來我們正式開始吧。8964 copyright protection155PENANAd8uNm28J02 維尼
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首先,第一步要搞清楚「簡介」和「大綱」的區別。8964 copyright protection155PENANAgHtVojj5jh 維尼
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這兩者的區別是「受眾」,也就是「寫給誰看的」。8964 copyright protection155PENANA6bK8TUjMus 維尼
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以簡介而言,簡單來說就是廣告,是寫給「買書的讀者」,以及沒看過這本書,「你想吸引他來讀的人」。8964 copyright protection155PENANA0ayTBdrXJq 維尼
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而大綱,則是寫給「編輯」或者「自己」看的,用來整理劇情脈絡、告訴編輯這部作品的設計圖,展現作品的價值。8964 copyright protection155PENANA3UNOvt2CN0 維尼
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在撰寫簡介和大綱時,呈現的手法會有不同。簡介是透過一些方法吸引人來看,大綱則是作者本人的紀錄,以及用簡單的方式告訴編輯這個故事到底發生什麼事,看出版社要不要用。8964 copyright protection155PENANAGoGb6aMxct 維尼
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因此,簡介必須要吊人胃口,大綱則是愈清楚簡單愈好。在這一部分,就得提到所謂的資訊量。8964 copyright protection155PENANAJANLssUPay 維尼
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在你的故事當中,什麼東西是能作為吸引,能直接寫在簡介上的,又有什麼是不需要寫出來的,要自己思考分辨。8964 copyright protection155PENANAC7iYdxDnAu 維尼
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如果是直接用文字說明的,應該不太好懂,以下則進入舉例環節。8964 copyright protection155PENANAEL9p67Zd04 維尼
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《魔都妖探》8964 copyright protection155PENANAZGVgrqpQLf 維尼
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原作 伍德·瓦懷特8964 copyright protection155PENANAuPvmg1COrf 維尼
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在繁華的國北市,有一家積欠兩個月房租的偵探事務所。8964 copyright protection155PENANAtApDeyUiVy 維尼
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「賀輔先生!我這個月的薪水呢?」8964 copyright protection155PENANAbuYOGVqBBe 維尼
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「可惡,這池又要抽到保底了嗎……」8964 copyright protection155PENANAGtFhWq1TnG 維尼
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「賀輔先生,不要再拿我的薪水課金了!」8964 copyright protection155PENANAIAMfQ0h2nn 維尼
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綁著棕色馬尾的時髦少女彩欣拍桌喊道,但依然無法撼動翹著腳滑手機的青年。8964 copyright protection155PENANA78ugX8n78H 維尼
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「你這個月也沒有工作呀?你不是我的助手嗎?」賀輔道。8964 copyright protection155PENANAfUGXxlz7lc 維尼
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「我沒有工作,是因為你一件工作都沒有接到啦!」8964 copyright protection155PENANAr9g8qN411S 維尼
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在助手跟剛才打來請款房租的電話催促下8964 copyright protection155PENANANmyhKlLqGZ 維尼
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兩人不得已拿著看板來到街頭拉客尋求工作。8964 copyright protection155PENANASElWGI65Nn 維尼
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「賀輔什麼都做事務所!合法的!不合法的案子都接!女性委託九折!」8964 copyright protection155PENANA8Ja9RruES6 維尼
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「不要亂喊啦!」8964 copyright protection155PENANASRsHnhZ0qm 維尼
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在有點狼狽的兩人面前,一名婦人向他們搭了話。8964 copyright protection155PENANALk1whnNJ1x 維尼
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這時的賀輔沒有想到,接下委託的同時,8964 copyright protection155PENANA6mjv3sVBmx 維尼
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自己也被捲入一場麻煩的事件當中。8964 copyright protection155PENANAjRpxnVi3Uq 維尼
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在上述的簡介文字中,有很多是我沒有交代的。8964 copyright protection155PENANA9FCXYhN4Gg 維尼
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包括男主角賀輔的能力,以及故事碰上怎樣的麻煩,前者是因為這是故事比較核心的設定之一,後者則是受限於篇幅,因此就簡單提一下,引起讀者的好奇。8964 copyright protection155PENANAmEMs7nMfiP 維尼
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而我有交代的資訊,包含:介紹男女主角大致的性格、兩人相處的方式、稍微介紹他們擁有怎樣的背景,有偵探要素,因此選擇提到偵探事務所,至於房租部分,則是表示他們行動的動機與目的,代表他們是為了賺錢而展開活動。8964 copyright protection155PENANAvJrKSRqbFV 維尼
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這邊先提一個重點,依照簡介所擁有的篇幅多寡,來決定文字的重點和想要透漏的資訊量。8964 copyright protection155PENANAgTF8f26fB3 維尼
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以這一篇而言,因為我不打算寫太長,當初我鎖定的重點,就放在如何呈現本作具有魅力的「輕鬆的氛圍」上,而透過角色的對話互動,就是個最直接的表達方式,這麼做還能直接套用原作中出現的句子,也不太會離題。8964 copyright protection155PENANAu9RwCp2IuQ 維尼
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下面再舉個例子。8964 copyright protection155PENANArbraHT169n 維尼
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《ARMED ART -機競少女在賽場微笑-》8964 copyright protection155PENANAUB5EQ1Jv8V 維尼
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原作 VIA8964 copyright protection155PENANApaoQl63A97 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection155PENANAsAR8CbBp7I 維尼
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機武競戰(ARMED ART)。8964 copyright protection155PENANAGKKk3zXwtd 維尼
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運用最先進的全息投影技術打造的新種運動競技。8964 copyright protection155PENANA5pp93fiYdW 維尼
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就讀圓桌機武競戰高等學校的少年──刻晨8964 copyright protection155PENANArgboYoxdOC 維尼
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某日收到一封疑似告白信。8964 copyright protection155PENANAGMOpzbtIIt 維尼
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按照提示前往天臺後,映入眼簾的是一位有著細雪般長髮的少女。8964 copyright protection155PENANAlIadi9T4dy 維尼
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少女名為雪璃。8964 copyright protection155PENANArR8KRSoKO4 維尼
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面對刻晨,雪璃面色紅潤,口氣也支支吾吾。8964 copyright protection155PENANAr74qToUbB4 維尼
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……難道這是來真的?8964 copyright protection155PENANAG60zT40FXQ 維尼
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受到氣氛影響,刻晨也緊張起來。8964 copyright protection155PENANAyHjdZniOYK 維尼
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就在這個時候,少女似乎終於下定決心。8964 copyright protection155PENANAlqiZe12HVK 維尼
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「──請、請你成為我的專任教練員!」8964 copyright protection155PENANA6eHMv1G9ju 維尼
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放棄機競的少年與想在圓桌競武祭奪下優勝的少女8964 copyright protection155PENANAor4JPQHvMP 維尼
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攜手挑戰機競運動頂點的熱血青春物語──於此揭幕。8964 copyright protection155PENANA0wHh3ciImX 維尼
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本作屬於近未來的運動作品,在這個簡介當中,我有交代的資訊包括:提一下本作核心的運動項目、介紹男主角是個學生、他所面對的第一個衝突,也就是有女生寄情書給他、介紹女主角、並且帶出本作的主線,亦即在比賽中奪下優勝這個目標。8964 copyright protection155PENANAaqVgZtU0xZ 維尼
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至於我沒交代的資訊包含:有哪些重要事件、對手角色、訓練內容等等。8964 copyright protection155PENANAd0sZVSVH7k 維尼
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這也是受限於篇幅的關係。而這個簡介所採取的策略是,將第一個最讓人感到期待的衝突點拋出來,並且順勢用對話句刻劃角色。畢竟拿起這本書的人,肯定知道男女主會參加比賽,只是「因為什麼契機」參賽,用這樣的場景來吸引讀者翻閱正文。8964 copyright protection155PENANAzg8ZTHbEHU 維尼
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這些是關於策略與資訊量的說明。8964 copyright protection155PENANAbLnTP7hmpH 維尼
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下面我們更進一步來談細節。8964 copyright protection155PENANAQidxtwcbD3 維尼
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我會用簡介中筆記的方式,來告訴大家一些重點。8964 copyright protection155PENANAmxOiJ8SVAK 維尼
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這邊直接把第一篇複製來用。8964 copyright protection155PENANAJlcDxqv27y 維尼
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《魔都妖探》8964 copyright protection155PENANAb4w35yEiKH 維尼
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原作 伍德·瓦懷特8964 copyright protection155PENANAFYIWcYohJ0 維尼
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在繁華的國北市,有一家積欠兩個月房租的偵探事務所。8964 copyright protection155PENANAlcluLKIbmX 維尼
(描述故事的背景,發生在什麼地方。用偵探事務所這個實際的建築物,能讓讀者產生畫面。提到積欠房租是這是置入引人好奇的點,也順便帶入角色。)8964 copyright protection155PENANASBd2xV6Ldx 維尼
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「賀輔先生!我這個月的薪水呢?」8964 copyright protection155PENANAWcjSsmOpRY 維尼
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(用對話句塑造角色。選用這句話是為了順便帶入男主角賀輔的名字。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAimcleH534F 維尼
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「可惡,這池又要抽到保底了嗎……」8964 copyright protection155PENANAwMY6wZpMNr 維尼
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(塑造男主角的人物性格。同時這也是原作中優秀的點,關於人物設計很優秀,相當貼近人心。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAKaGKa6xf3O 維尼
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「賀輔先生,不要再拿我的薪水課金了!」8964 copyright protection155PENANA6aA0M0ByFS 維尼
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(跟讀者透露兩人的關係,以及交代男主角會做出什麼事,藉此塑造角色。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAeyTupW3jla 維尼
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綁著棕色馬尾的時髦少女彩欣拍桌喊道,但依然無法撼動翹著腳滑手機的青年。8964 copyright protection155PENANAuWuY2IK5qK 維尼
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(由於只有對話句會顯得抽象,因此這邊用描述句介紹人物外觀,讓讀者產生畫面。也交代兩人當下的動作。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAPWdR27FYWh 維尼
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「你這個月也沒有工作呀?你不是我的助手嗎?」賀輔道。8964 copyright protection155PENANAmfAZF2Vw2Q 維尼
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「我沒有工作,是因為你一件工作都沒有接到啦!」8964 copyright protection155PENANAKdWBNKV1Er 維尼
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(前面是間接透漏兩人的關係,這邊是直接提到。而這邊也更進一步交代本作有趣的地方,鮮活的對話。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAu3KnUbrls2 維尼
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在助手跟剛才打來請款房租的電話催促下8964 copyright protection155PENANAg5QUbhbVxa 維尼
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兩人不得已拿著看板來到街頭拉客尋求工作。8964 copyright protection155PENANACB6BHQfWjE 維尼
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(說明兩人展開行動的動機,下一句則是用具體的動作和地點讓讀者產生畫面。)8964 copyright protection155PENANA1aGpXgUSex 維尼
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「賀輔什麼都做事務所!合法的!不合法的案子都接!女性委託九折!」8964 copyright protection155PENANAxgrCIoLHXE 維尼
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「不要亂喊啦!」8964 copyright protection155PENANAIuncKdBnlp 維尼
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(這邊的對話原本就很貼近人心,所以我就直接放過來。算是簡介中的主要亮點。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAkw84KsPHCt 維尼
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在有點狼狽的兩人面前,一名婦人向他們搭了話。8964 copyright protection155PENANAcsfkyqaCbn 維尼
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(帶入事件發生,用婦人點出委託者的身分,並引讀者好奇。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAOxiZpEYEGq 維尼
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這時的賀輔沒有想到,接下委託的同時,8964 copyright protection155PENANAAO8Xyw5NtI 維尼
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自己也被捲入一場麻煩的事件當中。8964 copyright protection155PENANA9pib4QLXqv 維尼
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(基於篇幅考量,我並沒有寫太多推理或冒險的要素,只是稍微概括一下他們有麻煩上門,讓讀者產生興趣。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAsSxA5uroHu 維尼
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接著則是第二篇的複製。8964 copyright protection155PENANAqwUb63b71w 維尼
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《ARMED ART -機競少女在賽場微笑-》8964 copyright protection155PENANAnqixD9giXc 維尼
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原作 VIA8964 copyright protection155PENANAtgLRb1TAHk 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection155PENANAlW6hazwrgu 維尼
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機武競戰(ARMED ART)。8964 copyright protection155PENANAV50RpaqOfP 維尼
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運用最先進的全息投影技術打造的新種運動競技。8964 copyright protection155PENANAghDQZ1eCnA 維尼
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(直接介紹本作核心運動項目。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAaqm9DvVsV9 維尼
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就讀圓桌機武競戰高等學校的少年──刻晨8964 copyright protection155PENANARrqELIMqF8 維尼
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(交代主角是誰,有什麼人物背景。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAph17pIzelU 維尼
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某日收到一封疑似告白信。8964 copyright protection155PENANASVIA7686fD 維尼
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(描述第一個衝突發生。吸引讀者目光。)8964 copyright protection155PENANA4yXhjw7SmR 維尼
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按照提示前往天臺後,映入眼簾的是一位有著細雪般長髮的少女。8964 copyright protection155PENANAwJxQn1bBeb 維尼
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(點名重要場景的地點,並且帶入女主角。先描述外觀與年紀,讓讀者有初步印象。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAtrBW49t4fm 維尼
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少女名為雪璃。8964 copyright protection155PENANA9945u2lzNU 維尼
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(介紹女主角名字。)8964 copyright protection155PENANADTwL9u0ybV 維尼
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面對刻晨,雪璃面色紅潤,口氣也支支吾吾。8964 copyright protection155PENANANgRLMZI6ob 維尼
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(描繪女主角當下的表情與動作,用美少女來讓讀者讀下去。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAZmRnhgBttW 維尼
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……難道這是來真的?8964 copyright protection155PENANADivzrdraNb 維尼
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(利用男主角的內心描述,貼近跟讀者的距離。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAbDQ4a6yrz9 維尼
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受到氣氛影響,刻晨也緊張起來。8964 copyright protection155PENANArBTwZYThlU 維尼
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(承上,上面是直接用對話句道出當下瞬間的反應,後面則是男主角意識到自己的反應。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAqld9wCxWqO 維尼
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就在這個時候,少女似乎終於下定決心。8964 copyright protection155PENANAIDNI9q0oE5 維尼
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(告訴讀者有事情即將發生,將描述重點放到女主角身上。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAk2MEW97Md7 維尼
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「──請、請你成為我的專任教練員!」8964 copyright protection155PENANAydKY3h60bU 維尼
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(原來不是告白啊,像這樣出乎讀者意料,同時也讓讀者感到對後續故事的好奇。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAHa3iBvkUzC 維尼
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放棄機競的少年與想在圓桌競武祭奪下優勝的少女8964 copyright protection155PENANAL2mPI3ZaUq 維尼
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(闡明男主的背景與反差,以及女主角所朝向的目標,關於兩人邂逅所展開的故事。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAoOYiFLu54T 維尼
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攜手挑戰機競運動頂點的熱血青春物語──於此揭幕。8964 copyright protection155PENANAlrBxf1VbpR 維尼
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(最後再次強化本作的主線,要在運動比賽中奪勝這件事。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAcDRPvHPQ9l 維尼
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以上兩段簡介都屬於短的簡介,而倘若有更多文字運用,就能寫長簡介。8964 copyright protection155PENANAm1sulkcAsa 維尼
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而這種就能交代更多資訊與衝突,也多半會被運用在參賽文章的簡介,也就是所謂的「大綱式簡介」。8964 copyright protection155PENANAsyGcGBlZnS 維尼
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大綱是給評審與編輯看的,需要清楚交代事件轉折,讓評審知道你有將轉折與結構安排在故事當中,同時也能讀出你是否了解本作的賣點,以及能讓他們推廣的方向。8964 copyright protection155PENANAd50A01ygXc 維尼
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簡介則是寫給讀者看的,需要交代出衝突,但又不能寫得太多,這樣就不會想實際閱讀故事了。8964 copyright protection155PENANA8xhTEQX5sk 維尼
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所以,為了滿足這種兩邊都要的狀況,比賽文章才會多採用「大綱式簡介」8964 copyright protection155PENANASO2Tj9CteV 維尼
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下面的故事是由我撰寫,但因為是舊作,在結構上並不是太過穩固,但還是能給大家作為參考。8964 copyright protection155PENANAmPfQL0Kgub 維尼
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《擔任助手的千美小姐不喜歡漫畫》8964 copyright protection155PENANAy825yiRad2 維尼
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原作 夜臨8964 copyright protection155PENANAr9wb4mKUO0 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection155PENANAYBa3IF7D0p 維尼
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曾經身為不良少年的常日光,在網咖邂逅一部網路小說並深受感動,8964 copyright protection155PENANAuNDXHpqZ1t 維尼
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遂與作者約定要成為漫畫家,還要讓作品在臺灣實現動畫化。8964 copyright protection155PENANAbOPrFFgRyZ 維尼
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升上大學的同時,日光順利在一間出版社發表作品,卻在某天因為記錯截稿日期而導致陷入危機。8964 copyright protection155PENANATD9ILOsT1y 維尼
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就在此時,被責任編輯拜託救場的竟是一位在出版社打工的計時人員。8964 copyright protection155PENANA5kJUw1gLEC 維尼
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她的名字是桐千美。8964 copyright protection155PENANAiloOng9Lqa 維尼
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「咦?……可是……我並不喜歡漫畫。」8964 copyright protection155PENANAdRcUVeKUdy 維尼
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「小千美,放心吧。當然會好好支付費用,由這傢伙。」8964 copyright protection155PENANAQuTbPbaHxA 維尼
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「好,我願意幫忙。」8964 copyright protection155PENANAvwh0SnMBn3 維尼
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因為能拿到酬勞就立刻改口的千美讓日光十分不放心,8964 copyright protection155PENANABBGIcSmHOz 維尼
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然而在她的幫忙下,日光奇蹟般度過危機。8964 copyright protection155PENANARpcxKYYn2u 維尼
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而後,日光為了招攬這名助手而提出邀約,但千美卻突然遭到不良勢力綁架,8964 copyright protection155PENANAcBcX4fSId2 維尼
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不僅身處在黑暗之中,手邊也僅剩下一本漫畫。8964 copyright protection155PENANArh4ZU62VVE 維尼
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千美發揮機智,終於解除危機。日光也順利和她締結契約。8964 copyright protection155PENANAGY6tUL5Q1Q 維尼
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然而,這次又換連載的故事出現問題──8964 copyright protection155PENANAdVLIod5VOm 維尼
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「天久老師,如果這份草稿就這麼畫成作品發表的話,你朋友不多的事實就會大方展示在讀者們面前了。拜託你,想想辦法。我是說真的。」8964 copyright protection155PENANAcK1ODDx9hB 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAyh3khp0VFP
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面對責任編輯發自內心的吶喊,8964 copyright protection155PENANArmz6ipxrdS 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANATx9z3Ny5Yj
8964 copyright protection155PENANAP8l0akpwiD 維尼
擁有凶狠外貌而遭人畏懼的日光開始嘗試在大學中結交朋友。8964 copyright protection155PENANAAROxlxXYzi 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAsagHxBO37k
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在過程中,日光定下了新的目標,他想讓這名助手也喜歡上漫畫。8964 copyright protection155PENANA0tLm3CwQ6g 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANA99JKCp5nYa
8964 copyright protection155PENANA36TxhL4dkR 維尼
時值年末,明明鄰近截稿日,日光的身體卻出了狀況。8964 copyright protection155PENANADVzGwIWWOX 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANASfmm4jdsQ6
8964 copyright protection155PENANAkvOXFO5jAq 維尼
此時,千美站了出來,然而──8964 copyright protection155PENANAnQVoLkq0Fl 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAQWbn5OJmDM
8964 copyright protection155PENANAeAhdGhjNfX 維尼
「不行。妳不能代替他畫。」8964 copyright protection155PENANAQX4dyRlqSs 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANA3V6jGFKIiZ
8964 copyright protection155PENANANpA37CCSDV 維尼
責任編輯並不答應她代畫原稿。儘管如此,不久前才深受日光感動的千美無法就此放棄,她提出了另一種可行的辦法。8964 copyright protection155PENANAsNFa5xvCSJ 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAAkWqDFcqHr
8964 copyright protection155PENANAJKDRrp4sbS 維尼
漫畫X青春校園;不良漫畫家與不喜歡漫畫的助手的青春喜劇於此展開!8964 copyright protection155PENANA2jjJHzunWI 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAxammEleOoD
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先給大家讀過一遍,下面則是一樣用實際解說:8964 copyright protection155PENANAj93O1z0cnF 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAxs4qxDLpEz
8964 copyright protection155PENANAmdNWH3dyBI 維尼
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《擔任助手的千美小姐不喜歡漫畫》8964 copyright protection155PENANALGDDAWC6F2 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAlPAP3w7JcX
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原作 夜臨8964 copyright protection155PENANAKNJ7aorzt3 維尼
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簡介:8964 copyright protection155PENANAbXsrokylQJ 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAF8iyjQ3kdF
8964 copyright protection155PENANAweC5tD8Lfv 維尼
曾經身為不良少年的常日光,在網咖邂逅一部網路小說並深受感動,8964 copyright protection155PENANA2mKtvWkb3u 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANA8LKLkI7g5O
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(點出主角,交代其人物背景。交代事件起因,且用實際場景來描繪畫面。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAhiGuUKLWsz 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANA2qKESCFbXd
8964 copyright protection155PENANAqpnOkpzMDC 維尼
遂與作者約定要成為漫畫家,還要讓作品在臺灣實現動畫化。8964 copyright protection155PENANAxdwaqSPgIw 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAJQeKvsLWI4
8964 copyright protection155PENANA5oTCgJa1Yp 維尼
(明確地講述其目標。也就是本作的核心。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAznqjDCw5tx 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAiRDhAf3CDP
8964 copyright protection155PENANATCoPAt4Fe7 維尼
升上大學的同時,日光順利在一間出版社發表作品,卻在某天因為記錯截稿日期而導致陷入危機。8964 copyright protection155PENANAt39eVxxcWP 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAJQosPYlziM
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(交代人物的身分,以及間接透露年齡。帶出第一個發生的衝突。勾起讀者興趣。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAWHW0VfNand 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANApJdaKlW1QI
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就在此時,被責任編輯拜託救場的竟是一位在出版社打工的計時人員。8964 copyright protection155PENANAqqLqI6UJAG 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAGczoAXbTSm
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(讓讀者出乎意料。並且導入女主角。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAnc5KN6Pgdr 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANA4EEKqCFCJZ
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她的名字是桐千美。8964 copyright protection155PENANAS0qcGiYcxX 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAZw3O6wQUCg
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(介紹女主角名字。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAeAVF7P9jZH 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAJ19uB7NIWN
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「咦?……可是……我並不喜歡漫畫。」8964 copyright protection155PENANACM5NdQJTUA 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANA4oPR183IzM
8964 copyright protection155PENANA22PTMx0qbl 維尼
(塑造人物反差,進一步吸引讀者興趣。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAPlo4eE5avG 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAAnMjLgfBCl
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159Please respect copyright.PENANA6WNugpDJDl
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「小千美,放心吧。當然會好好支付費用,由這傢伙。」8964 copyright protection155PENANA3RIjwt2Bwi 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAnaHPuRxA36
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「好,我願意幫忙。」8964 copyright protection155PENANAgjoRuZncoZ 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAb4jZo9hp1N
8964 copyright protection155PENANAWByGEc6WSw 維尼
(運用對話與行為態度塑造人物形象。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAUpk2hIOLZf 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANABBtiXMeDag
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因為能拿到酬勞就立刻改口的千美讓日光十分不放心,8964 copyright protection155PENANAVyjFg57k87 維尼
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然而在她的幫忙下,日光奇蹟般度過危機。8964 copyright protection155PENANA2NFEgmrFn9 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAiRPUeJQ8Hz
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(切換到男主角視角。反正肯定會度過危機,這邊就直接告訴評審跟讀者結果。)8964 copyright protection155PENANACcrkmUUchZ 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAiTZA1tqsEF
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而後,日光為了招攬這名助手而提出邀約,但千美卻突然遭到不良勢力綁架,8964 copyright protection155PENANAOhB8tUwBiv 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAcETKWub4Sz
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(描述男主角的行動,卻遭到未知人物的阻撓。)8964 copyright protection155PENANASAYC9WRfeh 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAyKaKBlwsW1
8964 copyright protection155PENANAloQ7ojaxHJ 維尼
不僅身處在黑暗之中,手邊也僅剩下一本漫畫。8964 copyright protection155PENANAz61JFD6OVZ 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAHiQrT8FHBr
8964 copyright protection155PENANAZUvG7SWN3d 維尼
(具體描繪出場景,講述這個危機實際上是什麼情況。)8964 copyright protection155PENANA0VMEO74Wlv 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANA0om6P4lCY9
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千美發揮機智,終於解除危機。日光也順利和她締結契約。8964 copyright protection155PENANAv1GJm5uZSU 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAypUrpRIWrh
8964 copyright protection155PENANAlaB5gqZ1Yo 維尼
(講出事情的結果,但不告訴讀者是怎麼解決的,這樣讀者就能自己翻書。而後面一句則是這個事件帶來的結果,則是告訴評審有好好讓該事件落幕。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAgktgHFR7iH 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAqhgbaNfZN4
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然而,這次又換連載的故事出現問題──8964 copyright protection155PENANAAULEFkhoqO 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAPSGp7xNZUz
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(描述新的衝突。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAPx0HIDOHQD 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAlBkjgkRwZ5
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「天久老師,如果這份草稿就這麼畫成作品發表的話,你朋友不多的事實就會大方展示在讀者們面前了。拜託你,想想辦法。我是說真的。」8964 copyright protection155PENANAtM1k0Olz85 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAJczBWPAWob
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(運用對話句貼近讀者,並塑造男主角的形象。)8964 copyright protection155PENANA11Ti1NXLsb 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAXhJd6mTU9l
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面對責任編輯發自內心的吶喊,8964 copyright protection155PENANAeKCCCZa50o 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAl3aiM5tDCL
8964 copyright protection155PENANAg3jPAmN45D 維尼
擁有凶狠外貌而遭人畏懼的日光開始嘗試在大學中結交朋友。8964 copyright protection155PENANA1vCZP2ZKSa 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANA2yev5uXzuZ
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(描述動機,以及他所面對的挑戰。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAVPTLYMQaxW 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAU5gLED4RA9
8964 copyright protection155PENANAEz5eFiTL9z 維尼
在過程中,日光定下了新的目標,他想讓這名助手也喜歡上漫畫。8964 copyright protection155PENANAJgjvb7kQHK 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAyu4OzJGNBC
8964 copyright protection155PENANAizRE9K3iwf 維尼
(帶出男主角因為邂逅了女主角而有所轉變。也告訴評審你知道要讓人物產生變化。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAkjQlrtKFu0 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAC1WEgngJ5z
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時值年末,明明鄰近截稿日,日光的身體卻出了狀況。8964 copyright protection155PENANA59UN1ezF24 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANATOyxk2E8L6
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(點出新的危機。用實際的情境,以及男主的狀況帶出來。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAj3J87R8F24 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAhaq6f72NLs
8964 copyright protection155PENANA9Vic0J3uVr 維尼
此時,千美站了出來,然而──8964 copyright protection155PENANAHDYh7W3Vc6 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAhINxeQkUq2
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(讀者原以為只要助手幫忙就能輕鬆解決,但是──)8964 copyright protection155PENANAbiK5qRHv5y 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAdk0U14XqLq
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「不行。妳不能代替他畫。」8964 copyright protection155PENANAU1krYWaVmT 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAWXjLZbE8jM
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(這個方案卻直接遭到否定,勾起讀者好奇。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAaOzkePQQ9t 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAcOwmZ7oSYV
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責任編輯並不答應她代畫原稿。儘管如此,不久前才深受日光感動的千美無法就此放棄,她提出了另一種可行的辦法。8964 copyright protection155PENANA6RfySzGA5f 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAzOE92KC8kR
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(正面講述實際面對的困難,並帶出女主角行為的動機,接著說明事情還有轉機。而後面會是個怎樣的劇情解法,就要讀者實際翻書。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAR4d1oBG5XW 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAiH68KhMPJ0
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漫畫X青春校園;不良漫畫家與不喜歡漫畫的助手的青春喜劇於此展開!8964 copyright protection155PENANAnmKDfmLyqR 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAZz8KTxZcFg
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(稍微寫一下本作的要素,並且用最簡單的方式概述一下人物。)8964 copyright protection155PENANAru5Tz9CUDs 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAtnd8GMFCdT
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差不多就是這個感覺。8964 copyright protection155PENANAfEaplBzxa2 維尼
159Please respect copyright.PENANAjusrU774Pn
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下面則是稍微整理一下重點,以及應該注意哪些地方。8964 copyright protection155PENANAZri2VnCN16 維尼
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1.要點出這個故事的主線,讓大家知道這是個怎樣的故事。8964 copyright protection155PENANA5gGOy6ncgs 維尼
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2.交代人物的動機,以及想要達成的目標,拉出故事主軸。8964 copyright protection155PENANAWpT3dIFb4r 維尼
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3.利用對話句能塑造人物形象,展示出他的性格。有對白演出會更加生動。8964 copyright protection155PENANAzL6nYZknjz 維尼
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4.藉著角色的內心描述能貼近讀者,讓人產生共鳴。8964 copyright protection155PENANA2ZPcpaTwte 維尼
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5.描述出劇情轉折。挑重點寫。8964 copyright protection155PENANAYtSMuF66v9 維尼
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6.講出故事的衝突,拋出問題,但故意不寫劇情解法。8964 copyright protection155PENANAjjbZJPHyhH 維尼
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7.盡量用具體的文字呈現,無論是外觀或者環境描述,且不要講廢話。8964 copyright protection155PENANAWYgv4mqgEK 維尼
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這邊舉例一下什麼是廢話:8964 copyright protection155PENANAuAKO3RLm2P 維尼
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在這種情況下,男主到底該怎麼辦呢?8964 copyright protection155PENANAYriCu46u96 維尼
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──這句對讀者來說一點用也沒有,完全沒有帶來新的資訊,有寫等於沒寫,就是個垃圾句子。一看就可以知道這人不會寫簡介。8964 copyright protection155PENANAqa2E2DeTIQ 維尼
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簡介就是廣告,寫廢話等於浪費篇幅。能在重要地方浪費篇幅的人,不是不得要領,就是個不懂得自我學習的人,這種人的作品我完全不想看。8964 copyright protection155PENANAK88BJ5KRpF 維尼
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8.在撰寫簡介的同時,要表現出「想讓拿起這本書的人想讀讀看」的熱情。8964 copyright protection155PENANANlB5rt7VOD 維尼
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9.懂得用反差來吸引讀者。8964 copyright protection155PENANAyuluCXGBUq 維尼
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10.讓讀者對於事件鋪陳有第一時間的想法,接著告訴他這種方法行不通。8964 copyright protection155PENANA2FFWZuAxwl 維尼
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11.知道自己作品的賣點,並且帶出讀者應該會獲得的體驗,也就是「預計能從這本書得到什麼樂趣」。8964 copyright protection155PENANAUxKMRd549U 維尼
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舉例:跟女主角的約會事件會吸引讀者,所以寫簡介就最好提一下,你可以寫一句「為了克服害怕跟人互動的症狀,我跟她一起去了遊樂園,意外體驗到了夏日氣氛」,類似這種句子,當然順勢加入劇情衝突會比較完整,像是「然而,正當我們的關係即將更進一步時,過去背叛她的朋友卻出現在我們的面前」,大概是這種感覺。8964 copyright protection155PENANAqFqclZaNY8 維尼
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其他還有很多,想一想這本書會有什麼能讓讀者期待的地方。就寫進簡介裡面。這樣讀者想要感受這個體驗就會想買書。8964 copyright protection155PENANAYlrJoP9RBS 維尼
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基本上,不同的篇幅,不同的故事,對於簡介都會有一些各自的寫法,但核心概念就是要做為廣告,能吸引人去讀。8964 copyright protection155PENANAL1FE5KPupT 維尼
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12.除了從上述的例子抓一下感覺,其實最好還是找一些自己認為吸引人的簡介來臨摹,學習他人優秀的地方。8964 copyright protection155PENANAmItHW8QmtJ 維尼
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不同的作品呈現方式都會有所不同。8964 copyright protection155PENANAOcXC94mnTs 維尼
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簡介是一門技術。如果能寫出吸引人觀看故事的簡介,那就代表你具有明白自己作品的賣點、控制要透露多少資訊量,掌控自己文字的能力、當然也包含呈現出作者是否有自我學習的習慣,還有灌注多少熱情在這部作品上,表達究竟有多想要眼前的人讀讀看這部作品的心情。8964 copyright protection155PENANAb3g4RTOQj8 維尼
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就連沒有天分的我都學到能侃侃而談,相信很多人也是能辦到的。8964 copyright protection155PENANAvZXor0zAh1 維尼
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拜託有愛就多動腦。努力提升自己。這樣投入的心血和態度是會反映在作品上的。8964 copyright protection155PENANAj7iklu8fq1 維尼
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要讓大家看看你究竟多認真。而你自己又是對自己有多認真。8964 copyright protection155PENANAwKHjehrpqS 維尼
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我還有很多需要學習的地方。寫這篇文章也是為了能見到更多厲害的對手出現,然後我會成為在這之中的第一。8964 copyright protection155PENANAlZwMrPPRlj 維尼
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那樣的人我想才是真正的創作者吧。8964 copyright protection155PENANAo6wYcdlhIp 維尼
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祝福大家。8964 copyright protection155PENANAVm9O3s3dZT 維尼
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