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中間的互動其實應該描繪女主的音樂如何吸引男主,救治到男主的內心。496Please respect copyright.PENANAa0PLSq9k10
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筆流暢舒服,看上去與故事匹配,讀得非常舒服。在這個故事塑造這個氛圍裏面,其實都沒有什麼好挑剔的了。496Please respect copyright.PENANAdJ37MlWDgD
唯獨有點附加意見就是,既然作者已經非常擅於掌握節奏同寫到好溫馨細膩的感情,建議日後寫愛情小說時,在劇情或者世界觀裏面下點功夫,讓故事看上去「特別」一點。496Please respect copyright.PENANAtPIcAZepJf
畢竟如今現實純愛的故事已經有點不待見,所以要吸引讀者 / 編輯眼球的話,就可能要在其他方面花點功夫哦。加油!8964 copyright protection492PENANAhouJXvFmlE 維尼
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非常好的作品啊,勵志,愛情,熱血都有,很有《爆漫》的感覺。496Please respect copyright.PENANAWUuJKtJNUS
整篇作品都好完整,沒什麼好挑剔的。496Please respect copyright.PENANAKHVZfrhgQJ
唯一可以挑刺就是對於「十年」這點算是較為牽強。如果寫長少少的話,可以是作者想17歲出書但失敗,然後再用十年參賽、投稿,成為一個知名作家,這樣就會扣題扣得好很多了。496Please respect copyright.PENANAvSn9zqym0K
其實這一篇也可以寫長,變成一部5、6萬的中短篇小說,我覺得也挺有潛質的。8964 copyright protection492PENANAjmNuxeJU8e 維尼
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一起來迎接最後一位參賽者~496Please respect copyright.PENANAHCWrXLGBj2
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很不錯的玄幻作品。其實這種參賽作品,更是限制了一萬字內的比賽,要撰寫玄幻或異世界類的作品是困難的。496Please respect copyright.PENANA1ewbd227nQ
首先很聰明先用現代及香港作背景,同時以茅山道法這香港人較熟悉的元素,變相不需要花費太多筆墨就能夠寫出玄幻元素。496Please respect copyright.PENANAip4rdlTcM6
整體從文筆、劇情、橋段等等實屬不俗。496Please respect copyright.PENANAk08zGb3qvH
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為了楓成而入寫作坑的人……莫名熱血啊!496Please respect copyright.PENANA0RHZ6D9NvV
以有限的字數建構完整的世界觀不容易,我認為作者在這方面是成功的。496Please respect copyright.PENANAs6SFKWYPq0
不過可以再留意內容的剪裁,精減一些與主線無關的敍述,如三位後人的感情線,可使情節更為緊湊。8964 copyright protection492PENANA9SY3ofEsRq 維尼
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缺點是劇情枝節太多,只是整體瑕不掩瑜,算是海選中其中一篇精品。8964 copyright protection492PENANAATPTZgHY1S 維尼
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1. 此等短篇字數有限,切忌得隴望蜀。不要野心太大創造過多角色,在一萬以內的短文之中,人多反而容易手腳亂。496Please respect copyright.PENANA5riQ2QPZK4
2. 對於傳統茅山道術知識的引用需要注意一下,適量拋出會顯得淵博,但過多則會適得其反,有賣弄之感。496Please respect copyright.PENANAtuTFOt9OmO
3. 如第一點所言,三名小主角其實性格同存在感都不算突出,比較流於表面,尤其感情戲其實頗嫌累贅。下次設計劇情時要注意一下。8964 copyright protection492PENANAq8o9wGtoEu 維尼
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嗯496Please respect copyright.PENANAFsblUg2MNq
這個作者是我認識的人呢496Please respect copyright.PENANAtMI2CoWFG0
見證到他的成長也挺欣慰的8964 copyright protection492PENANAXSS5IssWrG 維尼
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東南老人家模式啟動了8964 copyright protection492PENANAuV61BkJ2kh 維尼
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東叔,一起來玩⭕️❌吧8964 copyright protection492PENANA2vbjSHJwO4 維尼
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郁郁如煙消於天496Please respect copyright.PENANAz5gJPRl489
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Blackative496Please respect copyright.PENANAZvz1fzB58r
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接下來請三位退場496Please respect copyright.PENANAnuKGsp4Ndu
到自己的休息室給8位候選區的參賽者排邀請順序哦!8964 copyright protection492PENANA5EYN1v7acX 維尼
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我覺得下一站天后是很可惜的8964 copyright protection492PENANAIzzS0JiLhJ 維尼
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嗯,就是子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億。8964 copyright protection492PENANA7njVwG8GDw 維尼
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對8964 copyright protection492PENANAxmqH98Q9Rw 維尼
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你也是打滿高分的。8964 copyright protection492PENANAaL1rtcOgPv 維尼
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嗯8964 copyright protection492PENANAQzOj7KUKdQ 維尼
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如果當初沒有用到✊✊的機會496Please respect copyright.PENANALSRbIgDZMj
你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANAcFd9Q37ckb 維尼
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應該也不會。因為拳拳是直接順序第一名的選項496Please respect copyright.PENANAOfAWRDknpX
我覺得作者如果入選的話是紀言會比較符合他/她的風格496Please respect copyright.PENANA4BeWRcHgYh
我雖然能給到意見,但要入隊的話我還是想選一些我自覺能幫助更多的同學8964 copyright protection492PENANAO13cULcIJz 維尼
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你有甚麼想跟選你的參賽者說的嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANAw8J5U2vE2m 維尼
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多謝選擇我。496Please respect copyright.PENANAgJaNQIRC1U
希望我作為導師不會讓你們失望。8964 copyright protection492PENANAzsNdxG39sg 維尼
我能否一個個說?8964 copyright protection492PENANAVTFFlH23kN 維尼
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可以的8964 copyright protection492PENANA4eIslf8J8o 維尼
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首先跟日匀 說吧。8964 copyright protection492PENANAnRpkuKc68K 維尼
其實見到你的文章,我感覺見到一個強化版的「當年自己」。496Please respect copyright.PENANAWDtdZbWhLp
你的文字功力甚至比我當年紮實。劇情弱項也跟我當年類同。496Please respect copyright.PENANA223EHXJZ5v
所以我很希望能幫助你寫武俠,加油!8964 copyright protection492PENANAyv29GWTOXu 維尼
然後到過海巴士的洛羊。496Please respect copyright.PENANAfCVvTEvz41
很驚訝你那麼高水準的會選擇我,希望我不會讓你失望!8964 copyright protection492PENANAzDzH0qv4TJ 維尼
最後到逆時。496Please respect copyright.PENANAL2ZSUOvOOb
嗯 ..... 你的文很對我腦波,所以。。。。多謝!!8964 copyright protection492PENANAjisUP7ZFUR 維尼
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你會先選那些首選你的參賽者嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANAzebjBezGqS 維尼
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其實不會的496Please respect copyright.PENANAlWd50ne0Qe
但碰巧這次三個都極中我8964 copyright protection492PENANAvwvt1UDAUy 維尼
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明白。496Please respect copyright.PENANAzsH0tD2H4b
那你邀請順序已經想好了嗎?496Please respect copyright.PENANALeOM8HwXfy
有讓你猶豫的部分?8964 copyright protection492PENANALruKsaN0gT 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection492PENANAFaFlNdHhPW 維尼
想好了8964 copyright protection492PENANACieVnCschu 維尼
1. #19 過海巴士 儀洛羊496Please respect copyright.PENANAj48bOVJopa
2. #20 他的故事 日勻8964 copyright protection492PENANAREKyqmPy5l 維尼
其他全棄權讓給另外兩位吧www8964 copyright protection492PENANATaZoBb02N1 維尼
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竟然這樣!496Please respect copyright.PENANAuWkxJoWzEy
你就不怕另外兩位跟你搶嗎?496Please respect copyright.PENANAmKSYaZhnjQ
這樣你最糟可能只有一人進隊哦!8964 copyright protection492PENANAMa13LDwrsG 維尼
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我覺得他們一定不會搶日匀的。496Please respect copyright.PENANA7FZ0TYByXv
另外洛羊他們雖給到很高分,但我覺得他們有另外適合他們的496Please respect copyright.PENANAb2ueN2Ve7T
應該不會跟我搶的wwwww8964 copyright protection492PENANAbSCk9EKhkg 維尼
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好的,一起來看看 東南的Flag……496Please respect copyright.PENANAdUu2jM465w
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wwww496Please respect copyright.PENANAaLAPx47x9q
求不要搶496Please respect copyright.PENANAycVga6hj7G
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【楓成預備室】8964 copyright protection492PENANAo9DHHIKv42 維尼
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剛才完成了選擇門的部分8964 copyright protection492PENANAjhfGF28ocm 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection492PENANACrbW4HuEWy 維尼
是的496Please respect copyright.PENANArBfMHOdh7m
真是艱難的一部份(汗8964 copyright protection492PENANA3ahnJ99w8A 維尼
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你有感覺哪位參賽者進不了候選區496Please respect copyright.PENANAYHPvbWKE6j
很可惜的嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANA1EdEDdmoSf 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection492PENANA7dne0IAnfC 維尼
嗯…496Please respect copyright.PENANA6V5WWlJN2p
真要說的話496Please respect copyright.PENANAJ6IwVtynN6
子鶱的七十•七萬•七十億是不錯的作品496Please respect copyright.PENANAF5D98IE0Cg
只可惜名額有限8964 copyright protection492PENANA5WsSivPyaG 維尼
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那如果✊✊現在還可以用,你會用來救他嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANA61SyOrsD3M 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection492PENANAyQJ4FI72re 維尼
也不會,哈哈496Please respect copyright.PENANAyZgGO0F7r5
因為入選剩下來的選手也很出色8964 copyright protection492PENANAhLIMqIaVBT 維尼
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是的。496Please respect copyright.PENANAbMSMea8KqW
想問一下496Please respect copyright.PENANAf6tmOiCKct
日勻的作品——他的故事8964 copyright protection492PENANAgNSwxhJxG5 維尼
你好像是給他打滿高分的,496Please respect copyright.PENANAgw0Qw7Nkgr
但你好似沒有給他舉圈的吧?8964 copyright protection492PENANADwa2RevMmE 維尼
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是的哈哈,大概是圓圈太有限了(眼神死8964 copyright protection492PENANA9SlcACOV9N 維尼
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如果好像文楓落得三叉的下場,你會像紀言那樣出拳嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANAmxznstKnVy 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection492PENANAbwTuMErUUF 維尼
這個,大概南師父不會給叉哈哈,所以我很放心496Please respect copyright.PENANAIASGi4TZc3
所以應該也不會8964 copyright protection492PENANAftOjBkzgDM 維尼
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你就算好了他們想法是不是ww8964 copyright protection492PENANAVigwLXECgG 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection492PENANA8nIF1Fdh26 維尼
沒錯!496Please respect copyright.PENANAKAUwz7OF4L
你看洗版南師父就知道496Please respect copyright.PENANA6BfwerK0YO
古風武俠,他不會放過!8964 copyright protection492PENANACJupImiFwV 維尼
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那說回來,8位候選區的選手們,你是會怎麼給他們排邀請優先序呢?496Please respect copyright.PENANAnJPliGPut1
因為你不像另外兩位,已經定了第一名邀請的參賽者496Please respect copyright.PENANAxciMjUFslQ
你覺得是比較好、自在?496Please respect copyright.PENANAsryrzmX3Fg
還是比較擔心被搶人呢?8964 copyright protection492PENANAMnm7VH6OLA 維尼
楓成8964 copyright protection492PENANAOSLTp4fY87 維尼
也不會特別怕啦哈哈8964 copyright protection492PENANAHNLc9rMgfI 維尼
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【紀言預備室】8964 copyright protection492PENANAWQ5VA4WBL7 維尼
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剛完成了選擇門的部分496Please respect copyright.PENANAhzQZTHfe8K
有甚麼感想的嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANALmn1B4RF12 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection492PENANAJL0hAlWtBL 維尼
真的讓人緊張呢496Please respect copyright.PENANAGGpKwMmdLt
其實很多參賽者的實力相差真的不遠496Please respect copyright.PENANA9Xl8G7zSjW
在抉擇時真的讓人加倍為難8964 copyright protection492PENANAUhW0CBkCLN 維尼
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有沒有覺得可惜的參賽者?竟然進不了候選區這樣?8964 copyright protection492PENANAIznfSM1N6M 維尼
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其實此去拾年我覺得是寫得不錯的496Please respect copyright.PENANApUoNBBxPDE
可是類似的作品有點多496Please respect copyright.PENANAefbcmMaerh
真的很可惜8964 copyright protection492PENANAUbshawhqKv 維尼
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這是你當時沒有給出✊的原因嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANAcrqmG9TjZn 維尼
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此去拾年和十年陽光、董小姐都被我歸到同一類中496Please respect copyright.PENANAjcM3PnViTB
嘛,他也寫得很好,但另外兩篇真的是更好8964 copyright protection492PENANAWxszlIiEO9 維尼
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明白。496Please respect copyright.PENANAw6RTM4hdah
那現在進入了給候選區參賽者排邀請順序的環節496Please respect copyright.PENANAdRn7hNBYFQ
你有甚麼想法嗎?8964 copyright protection492PENANAZ2VFAHwQbr 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection492PENANAcRsMgFQzLM 維尼
說實在的496Please respect copyright.PENANAfV5DjLpDQy
我超級糾結496Please respect copyright.PENANAXCNjiIetP1
尤其是(竟然)有那麼多參賽者選我,壓力倍增呢8964 copyright protection492PENANALykSWx43lB 維尼
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有想好要根據甚麼去排的?8964 copyright protection492PENANAwaabMp8UvS 維尼
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本來是要跟分數排的,可是後來考慮到題材的問題,又再排了一次496Please respect copyright.PENANAsebXXSB4CC
如上所說,十年陽光和董小姐是在最高分之列496Please respect copyright.PENANAy46Fo05205
可是他們的題材有點類近496Please respect copyright.PENANAxcZOL8RMB7
我想讓我的學員們能接觸多一點不同的類型,這樣聊起來才更有趣496Please respect copyright.PENANAjPdPCi2BKB
所以嘛,即使二人都是最高分,我還是只會選一個8964 copyright protection492PENANA4J5HxRgOyc 維尼
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說回來,你是參賽者們的最搶手首選導師,就最多人選你8964 copyright protection492PENANAkK0qLTeibD 維尼
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當初沒想過這麼多人選我的哈哈496Please respect copyright.PENANA8HAVfjxtZJ
畢竟楓成是penana人氣王496Please respect copyright.PENANAtuxt44eVZg
東南也筆耕了十多年496Please respect copyright.PENANAVNjnIJTBqf
說到資歷和寫作的字數,可能我是最少的呢哈哈496Please respect copyright.PENANA89TG74CAuo
不過也感謝大家的愛戴8964 copyright protection492PENANAEAoGSszuFF 維尼
我先說我的首選好了496Please respect copyright.PENANAMdVhYauU3q
(是甚麼呢???????)(自帶效果!)8964 copyright protection492PENANArsEjSm9vQC 維尼
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不是你說要早點睡的嗎!www8964 copyright protection492PENANA9Yaakluz1l 維尼
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好了喇496Please respect copyright.PENANAnue7wvXPSo
第一位是十年陽光喇496Please respect copyright.PENANAutRLigwAt1
我要分享一下我的心路歷程XPXP8964 copyright protection492PENANAgqnt17REnG 維尼
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可以的~8964 copyright protection492PENANA0G03MpE2s2 維尼
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第二位就是成功獲得我一拳的獵巫!496Please respect copyright.PENANAzEycNyRvxK
第三位其實糾結了超~~~~~~~~~~~久496Please respect copyright.PENANAQfwQbgVA8X
是在輪候者和天使的惡作劇之間掙扎了好久8964 copyright protection492PENANAvNdioGM9H1 維尼
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但輪候者的Blackative 很厲害,寫了兩篇不一樣的作品~8964 copyright protection492PENANAMbfnx4BohS 維尼
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輪候者是非常成熟的作品,風格也已經定形了496Please respect copyright.PENANAtzK13VCCbI
時限內能寫兩篇也真的很厲害496Please respect copyright.PENANA8FaiHinCxS
不過時間小偷的話我就稍嫌有點負面了496Please respect copyright.PENANAwFtpTKT4wY
寫作作為興趣,應該是先令自己開心,然後再看看其他的可能的496Please respect copyright.PENANAonBQgkQ9Ia
至於天使的惡作劇,雖然分數上不及輪候者,但是他的文風很對我的腦波,我也覺得他有潛力496Please respect copyright.PENANA5UZUwEhZ4V
所以第三位一直在他們之間糾結8964 copyright protection492PENANAUA5AmDzv7u 維尼
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最後,你的選擇是……8964 copyright protection492PENANAPpOyyZrjj8 維尼
紀言8964 copyright protection492PENANAVCv16o7mdY 維尼
就是⋯⋯496Please respect copyright.PENANA0zKX4Cn5N7
天使的惡作劇!496Please respect copyright.PENANAKT5juKA2Ja
我希望Blackative能被其他導師收入戰隊496Please respect copyright.PENANAPliE5Tdb9U
他的實力是值得的496Please respect copyright.PENANAe9QnNFSpQo
奈何只有三個位置496Please respect copyright.PENANAuFBvYsrg1e
(嘛,規則也是我們三人定的,也沒辦法喇)8964 copyright protection492PENANAw9YzjXAL8p 維尼
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好了……我們就先聽紀言的頭三順序,不然要天亮了8964 copyright protection492PENANAn8yxlD9Ybm 維尼
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嘮嘮叨叨了一大堆呢哈哈8964 copyright protection492PENANA8tBUBOF9To 維尼
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謝謝紀言😂8964 copyright protection492PENANAkeuf0e4vUI 維尼
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(邀請順序收集中……)8964 copyright protection492PENANA1WWSP9thDN 維尼
(節目組整理中……)8964 copyright protection492PENANA8NTH4IbKfD 維尼
開始送出組隊邀請!8964 copyright protection492PENANAMxvWLfY1oa 維尼
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【參賽者預備室】8964 copyright protection492PENANAFKn6pSjUBN 維尼
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有些參賽者和導師們是兩情相悅的,496Please respect copyright.PENANApdWr9onLc9
最終修成正果,可喜可賀!8964 copyright protection492PENANA9sK7o48H14 維尼
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恭喜你,成功加入東南/ 紀言 / 楓成戰隊!8964 copyright protection492PENANAg6thJuNQge 維尼
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:O 我以為係21號先有結果😂 btw thx8964 copyright protection492PENANACbbFfM8Ncb 維尼
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哇!真架?🥰8964 copyright protection492PENANASYqMFcJCfR 維尼
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收到了,感謝你這麼晚了還要通知我們這群選手8964 copyright protection492PENANAyz3bQwKHLl 維尼
參賽者D8964 copyright protection492PENANAuoSodsCQ5o 維尼
感激涕零!🥺🥺8964 copyright protection492PENANAS4tLMHol5k 維尼
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我入圍了?8964 copyright protection492PENANAs8EH1zy1ID 維尼
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多謝你8964 copyright protection492PENANA56JpEf1hSP 維尼
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終於等到消息😭😭8964 copyright protection492PENANAVxQAPOIKm3 維尼
496Please respect copyright.PENANANLQD1mSeEI
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而有些參賽者就要陷入天人交戰的選擇!496Please respect copyright.PENANA5I2DYcKipG
面對非首選導師的邀請,是要接受,還是……8964 copyright protection492PENANAebcbB2R3pc 維尼
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導師A誠邀你進入他的戰隊,請問你願意接受嗎?496Please respect copyright.PENANAEvSwhzBVr4
提提你,你首選係導師B8964 copyright protection492PENANA2SkGh9mJfm 維尼
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雖然冇被導師B選中有啲可惜,但我其實唔介意被分到邊一隊(搔頭8964 copyright protection492PENANAa8pAsHVhcS 維尼
參賽者I8964 copyright protection492PENANA2Nlt0djKX7 維尼
但導師B有冇講咩?8964 copyright protection492PENANA70fSOsV4j3 維尼
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或者我解釋下先,個情況係:496Please respect copyright.PENANA1udrbKDX5c
導師A對你嘅邀請順序高過導師B。496Please respect copyright.PENANATd7Dq6Ikaw
如果你拒絕咗,有可能會收到導師B嘅邀請,496Please respect copyright.PENANAmiBGWNfxyI
但前提係:當時導師B戰隊未滿人。496Please respect copyright.PENANAqmxpxoOcU4
如果導師B戰隊已經滿人,但你又拒絕咗導師A,496Please respect copyright.PENANAEc4bxRyLZQ
你就只可以參與復活賽,睇下仲有冇機會入導師B戰隊。8964 copyright protection492PENANABoJd1WM1G7 維尼
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咁複雜既ODO?!496Please respect copyright.PENANAsra29QPnLr
喊出嚟,都好賭博喎(つД`)8964 copyright protection492PENANABgAv2cNqEI 維尼
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依個我最遲可以幾時答你?8964 copyright protection492PENANAR1jt4tzILj 維尼
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可能……盡快?8964 copyright protection492PENANAx0FAfZ3XzU 維尼
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我今晚墊高枕頭諗諗,聽日覆你唔好意思(つД`)8964 copyright protection492PENANAUuKru7bVw0 維尼
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咁就加入導師A嘅戰隊496Please respect copyright.PENANAQZha3eMqsn
我估,咁姐係佢幾欣賞我496Please respect copyright.PENANAhVH1q18lHu
掛8964 copyright protection492PENANAG16ppkfbRC 維尼
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我決定好了(超快496Please respect copyright.PENANAIMVvj4FVkW
我都係入導師A隊496Please respect copyright.PENANA32qmi1TIkZ
唔太敢賭(つД`)8964 copyright protection492PENANAXbpdQi0U5y 維尼
496Please respect copyright.PENANAvpUFdBbbWu
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【鏡頭關上後】8964 copyright protection492PENANAslBJGcTL8u 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection492PENANAgCMt4R05lF 維尼
我有少少寄語卑Blackative,我不如Pm你?8964 copyright protection492PENANALcSIRL5nwL 維尼
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好8964 copyright protection492PENANARfi5EM6iyp 維尼
東南8964 copyright protection492PENANAPeu3ushlQ5 維尼
首先要講一句好遺憾你入唔到戰隊賽。496Please respect copyright.PENANAVR4fSHvqiq
你兩篇文喺我眼中都係本次比賽裏面的精品,但我選擇戰隊成員時,實力雖然係其中一個考慮因素,但另外更多係會考慮成員風格同自己夾唔夾,同埋每位成員的潛力等等因素。496Please respect copyright.PENANAlIKu6MHhW3
你卑我感覺係一個已經相當成熟,好有自己一套嘅作者,無論係時間小偷定係豬果篇我覺得都發揮得唔錯,我讀時都頗有眼前一亮的感覺。496Please respect copyright.PENANAC2X2W58ElM
但奈何戰隊賽名額有限,我揀的三位亦係我認為最適合我戰隊的成員,所以就只能忍痛無向你拋出橄欖枝,我相信其餘兩位導師應該都同我一樣,對你落選係感到遺憾的。496Please respect copyright.PENANA92MyJ9OhLR
我希望你唔好因為呢個結果就感到氣餒,希望你能夠堅持同繼續寫落去。如果你參加復活賽的話,我亦會非常期待你復活賽的表現,加油!8964 copyright protection492PENANAH8iRSatmuK 維尼
【海選選秀環節】完!8964 copyright protection492PENANAMhBPJEjPty 維尼
多謝收看!8964 copyright protection492PENANAjTqiGsioie 維尼
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【第二階段:戰隊/復活賽】「太歲兵團 X 萌動學生小說集2021」寫作營8964 copyright protection492PENANAaZJITQMFT6 維尼
之後還會有很多寫作分享跟幕後花絮讓你看,不要錯過囉!8964 copyright protection492PENANAHPmi0NxIyE 維尼
參賽者們,8964 copyright protection492PENANA7p9usU7XOY 維尼
第二階段還有三十二天就要結束了!8964 copyright protection492PENANA6nEm1zHgFN 維尼
注意時間哦!8964 copyright protection492PENANAcG81iTakc2 維尼
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