
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』244Please respect copyright.PENANAu3KLcOxGBq
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:244Please respect copyright.PENANAOlJzaqWtoQ
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐244Please respect copyright.PENANAbKHvqOv7L1
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆244Please respect copyright.PENANAi5CjqAIHdx
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲244Please respect copyright.PENANAG45dJTb3sJ
帶出角色支線244Please respect copyright.PENANA2JAmdKMv9n
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破244Please respect copyright.PENANAa7JB8wuWZR
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫244Please respect copyright.PENANAXjkUCQfKGI
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴244Please respect copyright.PENANABbeCg6jA1r
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌244Please respect copyright.PENANAYqwUzEJJaG
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊244Please respect copyright.PENANAFnvcRFyflP
殺人犯vs富婆244Please respect copyright.PENANAKxmPCFHpbx
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌244Please respect copyright.PENANADl19HYuOF4
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴244Please respect copyright.PENANAagbRIgmxd8
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕244Please respect copyright.PENANAUOUILGFMnt
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。244Please respect copyright.PENANA63N5VfqXXE
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。244Please respect copyright.PENANAFJ3618nGxC
魂之詩244Please respect copyright.PENANAmNdeFbKQYV
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