
昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』230Please respect copyright.PENANAYMRW4O31EE
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:230Please respect copyright.PENANATDXQ3S5lyX
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐230Please respect copyright.PENANAfZHwxgeoox
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆230Please respect copyright.PENANAsA3jTB8Pfm
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲230Please respect copyright.PENANABYXtFsjkZU
帶出角色支線230Please respect copyright.PENANA7uhCRcRMSs
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破230Please respect copyright.PENANAlKXIYM7va2
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫230Please respect copyright.PENANA5Nlg4sgWSz
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴230Please respect copyright.PENANAqymVDE0Ciy
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌230Please respect copyright.PENANA6sVXBEJOZU
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊230Please respect copyright.PENANAig5VNZA5wZ
殺人犯vs富婆230Please respect copyright.PENANAyR5gDHXsNs
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌230Please respect copyright.PENANA0bMGL5Y3OJ
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴230Please respect copyright.PENANAkuORGzpCwe
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕230Please respect copyright.PENANAERD5YVa5vJ
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。230Please respect copyright.PENANAzqFN0fI8KD
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。230Please respect copyright.PENANA3kiJaQx7xI
魂之詩230Please respect copyright.PENANAKX4zSnn1Po
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