昨晚打warframe的新世戰打到超夜,好睏(死
接下幾篇會談論第三階段的上半部:『不平衡』『事態失控』『唯一無二的知心』『衝擊紅線』222Please respect copyright.PENANA7J7LCEGxb7
四個章節特意讓所有角色都出場,將眾人打散重組成小團體,達至大團體共融的效果。在構思期間,這個部份讓我苦惱良久。要讓之前沒有交流的角色相處並擦出火花,結果是點子很散,沒有流暢的起承轉合,以下是想到的橋段:222Please respect copyright.PENANAWp7uNPFjUg
紅楓祐嘉目擊昌抱大小姐222Please respect copyright.PENANAt7KHrzWNa4
突顯昌的柔弱和大小姐的羈絆222Please respect copyright.PENANAAyFSJgM9Xj
智賀亞里友梨玩遊戲222Please respect copyright.PENANAPznlgVreFY
帶出角色支線222Please respect copyright.PENANAqicRpbfGl9
友梨亞里暗角割腕差點被撞破222Please respect copyright.PENANAddIzb1OdVr
危險的百合香
櫻安熊發現倉庫222Please respect copyright.PENANAZQz31QDUd4
主線
初秋目擊大小姐切嘴巴222Please respect copyright.PENANA0sSjlctlYy
證明大小姐真意
祐嘉質問昌222Please respect copyright.PENANAveSFItlDsa
祐嘉對紅楓的信任
紅楓與大小姐閒聊222Please respect copyright.PENANAQhEEspY3zA
殺人犯vs富婆222Please respect copyright.PENANARHVQeTNvWP
一輪深思後,將以上點子整合成四個章節:
1 祐嘉質問昌222Please respect copyright.PENANA4Cr4lW7b6b
2 紅楓幫大小姐切嘴222Please respect copyright.PENANAh3IDRir8VU
3 智賀玩遊戲,友梨亞里割腕222Please respect copyright.PENANAfATFkkjugb
4 櫻安熊發現倉庫,初秋打哈哈
基本上只定立了籠統的骨幹,實際内容是邊寫邊想的。222Please respect copyright.PENANAzxnib3KcGV
接下來我會用四篇日誌續一細談。222Please respect copyright.PENANAqgw4kJBdTQ
魂之詩222Please respect copyright.PENANAUbTy9TqVbz
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