這是我首次寫 rap 歌詞 (09/22/2023 完成),因為我節奏還不會抓,所以先借用 MC HotDog〈貧民百萬歌星〉的節奏&旋律來寫自己的 rap 歌詞〈夏之熱力學〉。
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〈夏之熱力學〉
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啪啪啪啪啪啪天啊 傘骨竟然全斷
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四周扭曲又冒煙 好像世界大戰
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熱力學 從第零到第三定律485Please respect copyright.PENANAHP1DYuochD
講的是熱這能量如何平衡和遞移485Please respect copyright.PENANAlW4NqhkDj6
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Give me a fine fridge 冷卻我夏天的熱能
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熱氣不間斷累積 持續傳遞到我這裡485Please respect copyright.PENANAXxODE3XcCc
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逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說485Please respect copyright.PENANAJ8wLo1xV4w
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它485Please respect copyright.PENANAR6gbw0ugDy
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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降低熱氣 非關修養 而是靠分析485Please respect copyright.PENANAl7k8acRsyP
邏輯和紀錄裡 思緒才得以梳理485Please respect copyright.PENANAaZDwpdmL7T
沒有人知道怒氣變成動機包括我自己
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熱力是一種動量 燒起來挺耗能485Please respect copyright.PENANAyCh0inGxY7
平常我彬彬有禮 典型INTJ人485Please respect copyright.PENANAwRnd1uRWKO
人不犯我我不犯人 人如果犯我485Please respect copyright.PENANAH1dWleLpzE
用事實反擊截圖蒐證 這是種本能
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一隻網蟑 觸鬚是雷達拼命找人蹭485Please respect copyright.PENANANgsGRTpxmx
在網路上面爬來爬去 那氣味臭不可聞485Please respect copyright.PENANA72XNRdUc9s
以為虧人很爽洋洋自得485Please respect copyright.PENANAIfG2R44bSp
卻不曉得天道好還 大家都有個小本本485Please respect copyright.PENANAjdd2menIbl
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無形者例行一遊 在這熱爆的夏祭485Please respect copyright.PENANAqYLmTuxUj3
沒想到 參與一齣莫名的破戲485Please respect copyright.PENANAZMpxFs9iGE
那隻網蟑什麼都不怕 以為最大是自己485Please respect copyright.PENANA5t57Z17vAk
以污辱 以扭曲 把無形者扯進去485Please respect copyright.PENANAGiBiE6Z5P5
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?485Please respect copyright.PENANAcK9ReaUwcu
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說485Please respect copyright.PENANAzYvsNFwZ43
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它485Please respect copyright.PENANA9D9bjjaqUd
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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就算只剩下一張嘴那又何妨?485Please respect copyright.PENANAgTuaVEjw9P
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扭曲污衊侮辱人鬼神的網蟑485Please respect copyright.PENANANYdo6A8sgz
待無形者彙整報告 全身爛光光
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將要開始的是到達臨界點的業力485Please respect copyright.PENANAAx3iF2cW6W
作用力必定會帶來反作用力485Please respect copyright.PENANAznckzUWBfm
網蟑舉止人鬼神再也看不下去
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人在做惡,天在冷看485Please respect copyright.PENANA98waEy4upp
懲罰或者機會都將由祂們決定 人無法管485Please respect copyright.PENANAp9kZOiqjNf
網蟑現在所有一切都是它不斷拼命485Please respect copyright.PENANABD4RArQtyP
用骯髒言語行徑 自己走向絕境
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?485Please respect copyright.PENANAwRUUTfpzol
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說485Please respect copyright.PENANA6v01y0qMxR
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它485Please respect copyright.PENANApOsAYpplZF
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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怎樣才算修養 罵不還口?485Please respect copyright.PENANAgMR5o83IRo
逃走還是戰鬥 這還真不好說485Please respect copyright.PENANAiSwsAlYCC4
無論小強爬到哪 都有眼睛盯著它485Please respect copyright.PENANArJRJYoV7zv
夏天這個季節 好兄弟們比較自由
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We're watching
We're watching
We're watching
you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
We're watching you, dude !
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We're watching
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you, dude !
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魔鏡歌詞網〈貧民百萬歌星〉歌詞連結:
https://mojim.com/twy101024x12x2.htm
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【創作感想】
目前為止,我已經寫了上百首新詩,也聽過不少 rap,本以為 rap 不難寫,沒想到一寫才發現:rap 歌詞的字數真是超・級・多!而且要配上節奏來唸,不曉得哪些拍子適合 rap 節奏?華爾滋的 3/4 拍?探戈的 2/4 拍 (註)?還是其他?
雖然我音感不錯 (以前是合唱團團員,也玩過MIDI),但節奏感不夠強,所以第一首 rap 就先借用現有歌曲的節奏&旋律,不過歌詞完全是原創。
之後會來發展自己的節奏能力,使用我的蘋果福利機的原生軟體 GarageBand 做節奏+作曲,配上我的原創歌詞。
韓森老師的《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》有提到,rap 歌詞可以先單獨存在,之後再放上節奏和旋律;所以等我寫熟一點,應該會直接寫歌詞,之後再自己創作節奏或者請人配。
寫 rap 歌詞,也算是另類新詩,還滿有趣;因為 rap 歌詞的承載量大,也比較直白,所以用它來寫讀書心得或法律常識,未嘗不是某種變形的筆記或網誌。
最緊要有意思!!
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(註):【探戈舞的認知】
http://www.dancers.com.tw/te/te-03/te-0313.html
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【博客來書店:《來韓老師這裡學饒舌》】
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