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Twinkle twinkle little star

弄墨

Apr 25, 2022

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平常我們唱Twinkle Lullaby（一閃一閃小星星）只有一節，但其實英文是有五節的~

王雨然譯的中譯版本不錯，只是有幾句我覺得太文縐縐了不太像兒歌，所以有修改。和大家分享一下!

Twinkle, twinkle, little star, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJKcVd4Jwvb

一閃一閃小星星

How I wonder what you are! 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzirRswX13n

遙想何物現奇景

Up above the world so high, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZgaFQtHOUR

高高掛在天空上

Like a diamond in the sky. 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsMxjtBDS14

像顆鑽石放光明

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When the blazing sun is gone, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLbcq3fvGuW

直到烈陽已燃盡

When he nothing shines upon, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDJ4ab0i1JX

落日下沉星河清

Then you show your little light, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcUaxapTode

點點光芒夜空現

Twinkle, twinkle, all the night. 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQHQ7IpB3uH

一閃一閃總不停

395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSQK6KUx9pS

Then the trav’ller in the dark, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuLfjy8WVpj

漂泊旅人夜中停

Thanks you for your tiny spark, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsUleCVnmvK

小小星光伴他行

He could not see which way to go, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuJzcp7VloB

漫漫長夜路難尋

If you did not twinkle so. 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3TSQ0mKlbb

唯靠星光亮晶晶

395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQLbilVG6Ul

In the dark blue sky you keep, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJfX2ZJiojR

深藍夜空你身影

And often thro' my curtains peep, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFh20Sjf2Cb

時常窺過我簾屏

For you never shut your eye, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN9eNBqmm1d

從未合上你眼睛

Till the sun is in the sky. 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡygqIgpyc9B

直到太陽再現形

395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn8n32noTjQ

'Tis your bright and tiny spark, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2i3kv0DkZi

因你微亮星光領

Lights the trav’ller in the dark, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡynSQyOuW1U

照亮旅人夜中行

Tho' I know not what you are, 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK6B4nK9DAw

雖我不懂你奧秘

Twinkle, twinkle, little star. 395Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzmWw968OO0

一閃一閃小星星

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