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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGTtJtUKT2v
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU8dmyDDrNp
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2qemk2tFXv
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHa0Y9PbA56
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Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdT0pNzsRk8
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKCbISe6Cba
420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSTtaKmSwqH
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLFwiEN1J7o
420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqSoBeIsqeR
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡERcFmH2E24
420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQgoZYqGZhX
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNnZT4nKS0A
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By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMAJM4sqU57
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But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYr3iGrrAqI
420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5Xj5lGB2U1
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0q8Wc6Ecsd
420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjoXbmLqda5
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXnaLMoqGXz
420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwe1fEiteBF
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYvjyaIpfP7
420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIxaA3ewU3x
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpm36DW3i0u
420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaUfjc6XggC
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
ns 15.158.61.17da2
