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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtOjS8Biibm
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0UycNv2AbQ
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe5CVwj2l3p
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhALdKwRSYJ
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgBZnA0eRxi
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMA8UtrnRLN
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSaR83OEaXt
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGutKWgCGEb
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYSFQ7chvvE
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSF4B49LuTt
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtAxDlqZn89
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnCE6aZmMSL
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpkWhkYIYuM
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg7FwKsF7uF
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKyzhWidAc8
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbCUXG1boEz
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM3TNT41z5u
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡczHGPz4Bwz
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMJi9W1kR24
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfmNHIY0Aps
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz6Czuvc5JA
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC9Qjgb3qOq
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIouCeF3JAP
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM70pgHOxZY
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX9XupvKm3w
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHPoYHCGhuy
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQkOV1hpNaa
391Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWK2gxRNZ2w
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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