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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT0ELgEMxNE
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXbruimNxRL
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYfWpo1IeV7
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSg8KbUoc9P
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEq0GtnIKTB
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ28o0Sen93W
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9MoPXQs2pS
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsdfSt4X4S7
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBUFdjG0L0O
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpWtw63Ez5d
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLVmfXBaIB4
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNhRqNyy50q
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd7qrhJ0sO3
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyTZBRTF0D4
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSSCdhm8wyc
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVkuKqKaqaS
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlVYuuS8piq
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz0k9pxjqqx
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgwWUTpj836
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZeQNyTuWBT
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGQLPQkVezI
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkjALkd1A85
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmF94JVur6r
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwySVTaqzsk
423Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡleE5fKTDHe
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
ns 15.158.61.43da2
