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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzp8f2iJx41
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBxugnzc1GT
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKKYo1MS2ub
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiCalti93Tm
447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZK1h48xogh
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk1A4FJQToJ
447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUykOXcX4q9
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHUYZUAZ2yz
447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzMJMDSoSQr
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsxGTHIhSoB
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnNKPfonRLX
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And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9DtAZVOrUO
447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQPES2BDfXg
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5ElHMZt8b7
447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx8KbvX0EF5
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5lgWRdjsOO
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Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3zkVrCak2j
447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1lMXsxdOq7
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3wrYDRTqPE
447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡePNnjoZ62D
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgUU6vhmJVX
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，447Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6FR8BA9anW
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So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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