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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpala9yf4wq
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMkGSYa52Db
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTk7oRK60gB
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9xUl0RdKc6
393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT5oRiK16xm
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAvdTJ6FEhs
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And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhtK13A7J7i
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Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDNumb7hv5r
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡucdSQBKsIL
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And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfuDfsk6AnU
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By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7dJXCZ9wf2
393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4lttTfbAT4
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8XNhW8Y8TA
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Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt98TPfwi3t
393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMg2zxAoat7
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4umnj3Q4yz
393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxxyK9CM4bv
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeEJsJJfndP
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，393Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUzNgeyUmIS
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So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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