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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeuWyaBpuTR
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgHu0OqEj1s
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPvutP5PBTt
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Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAkQ2gDV5TU
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIn1Np793IA
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgNCxrTn4bf
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4mUaVxw0Cj
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4ZZgWFI3AD
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP6I3z2mXw7
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp0A3uWtrjC
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And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwaE0L5QCzY
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡabH9w20LuM
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGXZzFzfcp2
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnJAX2I0Vj9
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkvCCgXhjzJ
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCmOnZwPx8J
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU5c5A672FZ
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOmg0zJ2oLm
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj6PaiUqlvv
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpoT9oa6met
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡA2wAyhrN3g
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8zyRVaCyaT
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVjGutNiPGC
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZrdxYDehXb
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡchAFLedPEg
408Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnD862iqCUu
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
ns 15.158.61.17da2
