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如果說莎翁的十四行詩是英詩中的王冠，那麼第十八首可謂王冠上的明珠。366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdoBWIjOChr
一首短短的十四行詩裡面，竟然用到了十種修辭格：明喻(simile)、暗喻(metaphor)、設問/反問(rhetorical question)、擬人(personification)、相關語(pun)、矛盾(paradox)、頭韻(alliteration)、誇張(hyperbole)、借代(synecdoche)及倒裝(inversion)，而且題材還糅合了詩歌、夏天與人的永恆之美，簡直就是譯者的噩夢XD366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡymKMJIgSFK
分享一下我自己嘗試翻譯的版本(並且借詩向大家告白)，不過還是推薦大家先細細品味原文。
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
我怎能把你比做夏日？366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyt1j6qTh3V
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡow9934zaqs
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
你比夏日更溫柔動人。366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNkH9buWPLj
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZfMnlaG5Qn
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
狂風搖落五月的嬌蕊，366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYSjc2g01CF
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNO6HNHIvjc
And summer's lease hath all too short a date.
夏日的時光稍縱即逝。366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDx2WOMEXEJ
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy0OqTVf1Rx
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
烈日之眼時而格外灼熱，366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBUR5h4Rsgd
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMwVRtY19iM
And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
金色面容轉眼黯然失色，366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOoIkvNFr3C
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw0zPBAGfvn
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
一切美麗終不免凋敝，366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUqe1ZvMjQT
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZpIJbNiH3D
By chance, or nature's changing course, untrimmed;
不論天意無常或有常。366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ztNDvMFiS
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOQEYxV8THl
But thy eternal summer shall not fade
但你的長夏永不褪色，366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJBNifIeRh1
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIRCCN0qXHh
Nor lose possession of that fair thou owest,
你的美麗也永不消失，366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX0r8NOX3WC
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPb02OCIGtn
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
死亡陰影不能困住你，366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyKWNuh5poo
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtIHgJyIMYE
When in eternal lines to time thou growest.
你與永恆的詩句同壽。366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡptMV13tiwg
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZU1K0oMkxx
So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
世上一息尚存，世上一目尚視，366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwt1tGstPjk
366Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz2zgGymvTN
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
此詩永遠長存，賦你不朽生命。
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