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    做金庸的男人
    2016年金閱獎得主。

    已出版9本小說,寫作越15年。

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故事大綱

近未來的世界,我被三個人綁架了。兩男一女,男的有一個是老人家,女的是個大美女,而年青的男人正拿著槍指向我的眉心。

我並不確定自己哪裡得罪了他們三個,直至他們逐一和我對話,我才終於了解一切都與我過去的罪孽有關。我沒法面對自己的醜陋,而他們則赤裸裸把我不願承認的事實放在我眼前。最後,整個存在被徹底否定的我,自殺了。


這部算是小弟公開的第一部非《是咁的》系列小說,也直接以書面語完成,中途不曾連載也沒有給任何人看過。現在工務繁重,重新PICK UP續寫訂閱內容之前,也不想讀者們乾等,於是把這部作品稍作修改校對後給大家看。

再次原諒小弟為了刷更新數據採取每日連載的方式,希望盡量每天更新1000字。

這段時間我會盡快把工作清理掉(其實清不完)總之騰出一點時間來,一方面把喪屍故事的第一季發佈,同時寫好第二季,讓大家接下去看完故事的結局。然後再花時間慢慢補回訂閱的小說和創作技巧內容。

感謝各位讀者的體諒和支持。

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第九章︰文森.拉羅02
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第九章︰文森.拉羅03
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第九章︰文森.拉羅04
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第九章︰文森.拉羅05
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第九章︰文森.拉羅06
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第九章︰文森.拉羅07
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第九章︰文森.拉羅08
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第十章︰中本里志01
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第十章︰中本里志02
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第十章︰中本里志03
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第十章︰中本里志04
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第十章︰中本里志05
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第十章︰中本里志06
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第十章︰中本里志07
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第十章︰中本里志08
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第十章︰中本里志09
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尾聲︰蒂花
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